My newest contribution: Feedback Requested.

[Black_Bird]

Alexia Ch. 1 is a story of a young lady's kidnapping and introduction into an underwater city of bondage and dominance. While this story does have elements of Science Fiction woven into the setting, it has a Classic BDSM theme of Boy meets Girl, Boy takes Girl, Girl submits to Boy.

Please give it a read and tell me what you think. Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated!

 

[Black_Bird]

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Yes - I'm giving this thread an annoying bump... I keep my Bumps one per thread - so please give me some feedback! I want to know what I could do better! No kid gloves needed - I promise!