My new story...

nakdsub

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I have a new series, chpt 1 of which just posted tonight. It'll be 3 parts. I'll tell a brief synopsis;
While doing his yard work, an elderly man suffers a heart attack. While trying to get to help, his mind wanders and remembers the 3 loves in his life.
Each chapter is a new love of course, starting with his high school sweet heart.
The name is; The Last Chimes of Fall.
Here is a link. Please let me know what you think.
Thank you.
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-last-chimes-of-fall
 
Liked it a lot. Interesting characters, written well so that I really cared about watching their progress. Certainly the equal of the best "first time' HS 18-yo's I've ever read on Lit [normally I don't make it halfway through the first page of an HS "first time" story before bailing out, they're so tritely identical]. You've got me eagerly awaiting the next two chapters, nakedsub. Thanks.
 
Wow! Thank you so much...

I submitted chapter 2 on Wed. Should hit on Monday I believe. I will have chapter 3 done shortly and will probably submit next Wed.

I hope you enjoy all the chapters as much. Again, thank you for your great comments.
 
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