niceguy2002tim
Literotica Guru
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Hello,
first I must apologize for misleading you. This post is not about a NEW story. In a way it is, keep reading and I'll explain.
3 months ago I created a sequel to my story
A College Girl To Be.... When I created this story, I based it off one possible storyline. Here was the problem... The way in which I wrote it was not very good. In the introduction I failed to explain it was based on the other storyline. I included the story path in the guidelines for the story. Therefor it might have been confusing and not very enjoyable to new readers.
NOW... I have re-writen the introduction to include a prologue, if you want to call it that. I present to you, the newly introduced story. I have spiced it up and am ready to put the ball into play!
Secret Agent, Sarah Banks. *A College Girl to Be -2*
Let me know what you think. If you have read it before, is it better now? If you're a first time reader, what do you think?
-Tim (niceguy2002tim)
first I must apologize for misleading you. This post is not about a NEW story. In a way it is, keep reading and I'll explain.
3 months ago I created a sequel to my story
A College Girl To Be.... When I created this story, I based it off one possible storyline. Here was the problem... The way in which I wrote it was not very good. In the introduction I failed to explain it was based on the other storyline. I included the story path in the guidelines for the story. Therefor it might have been confusing and not very enjoyable to new readers.
NOW... I have re-writen the introduction to include a prologue, if you want to call it that. I present to you, the newly introduced story. I have spiced it up and am ready to put the ball into play!
Secret Agent, Sarah Banks. *A College Girl to Be -2*
Let me know what you think. If you have read it before, is it better now? If you're a first time reader, what do you think?
-Tim (niceguy2002tim)