My Monster Ball Feedback Request

[adoniss]

I recently posted Part 2 to my story My Monster Ball. I would appreciate any feedback you can provide.

Part 1 can be found at http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=101045,

and part 2 can be found at http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=109963.

Thank you for you response.

adoniss