My Latest...

[SexyChele]

Okay, I'm prepared to take as much as I give out! Actually, a new story of mine just posted, and I'm a little on edge as this is the first non-consent story I've written. (So, if you are not into non-consent, well, you can figure it out) So far the votes are great, and the feedback is good. My main concern is the ending. I personally feel it is weak, and would like to hear what other writers have to say.

The story is here:

Cassie Gets Arrested


Any and all comments welcome!

Thanks!

 

[penguindance]

 

[damppanties]

Very good

After reading the three Cassie stories, she's really familiar now. I loved this one too but still my favourite remains the first one. Keep writing and I'm waiting for the fourth one you said you're working on.
A thought - wouldn't this one fit better in BDSM?

-DP.

 

[SexyChele]

Thank you both for the positive words of encouragement! I appreciate it.

Pretty - I'm glad the story held your atttention! I have started to develop a series of "Cassie stories", but am not putting them into chapters, as each story is (should be??) complete within themselves.


DP - Your encouragement means a lot to me! I'm glad Cassie is becoming familiar to you - she has certainly become a real person for me! And hopefully, the first illustrations will be done soon and posted to Lit. In the next story of Cassie, I'm working on recapturing her vulnerability once more.

Edited to answer DP's question regarding BDSM: In this story there are elements of BDSM used, yes. However, though Cassie's body responds favorably to the stimulation, her mind is still against what is being done to her. She is being physically restrained, the reason being that the State Trooper does not want to take the chance that Cassie would run or use a possible weapon. Anyway, a long explanation to say that, ultimately, Cassie did not give mental consent, though her body responded, so I placed the story in non-consent.



Thank you both!