My latest

[Wildcard Ky]

My latest story has been posted and it's not doing too well in voting.

Anyone care to read and comment?

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=372272

 

[Guest]

It's well-written, with deliciously hot sex.

You'll probably offend a few who believe that the woman in the story is being mistreated, but for those of us who appreciate a little rough sex- yum!

One word of advice - it's kind of bad on the woman to go from vaginal to anal, vaginal to anal, vaginal to anal. She can get a nasty infection - not a good idea - and you may receive negative comments because of that. Otherwise - well done!

I voted but didn't leave PC. We decided during the last contest that they cancel each other out.

 

[Wildcard Ky]

Crim edited it for me, and she mentioned that the ass to mouth thing might be a turn off for some.

I considered changing that, but decided not to. That's the way the story came out when I wrote it, so I left it.

Glad you liked it.

 

[Guest]

Crim edited it for me, and she mentioned that the ass to mouth thing might be a turn off for some.

I considered changing that, but decided not to. That's the way the story came out when I wrote it, so I left it.

Glad you liked it.

I'm talking the vaginal to ass, vaginal to ass, vaginal to ass.

Actually, I just reread how you said he ran it along her pussy, not actually penetrated. Okay - never mind.

Ass to mouth does squick some, does turn on some.

I'm glad you left it in the story. It does seem to fit.

 

[desertslave]

Ass to mouth is bothersome to me, but I think you made the right call, it fits just right within the story.

Very good, BTW! Definitely enjoyable.