My Latest Story

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J.Q. Hack

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Hello,

I'd appreciate it if everybody could give me some feedback on my latest offering. All comments and suggestions are welcome but I'm most interested in what all of you think of the writing, characters and story development.

I haven't published anything on Literotica in about 9 months. I had a bad case of writers block and anything I started to work on didn't seem right. I seemed to have overcome it but now I feel like this story is my first attempt ever at writing.

Here's a link to my story so have at it: Desire & Lust at the Laundromat
 
I R.V.C.ed your story. Great story, but guys know how to do laundry, they just pretend they don't.
 
Latest story

Any constructive suggestions or criticisms of my latest story?

I'd certainly like to know how I can improve my writing. Any help would be appreciated.
 
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