The first one I submitted was Sarah's Last Chance
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.cover/4427
Then I made The End of the World As We Know It, which I am far more proud of
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.cover/4433
Both of them are heavy BDSM and NC.
I appreciate any sort of feedback, at all.
As far as additions to the stories are concerned, my only requirement is that all of the branches and choices revolve around characters that the current player character must make. I don't want 'What does she find behind the door?' as the continuing question.
Cheers, all.
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.cover/4427
Then I made The End of the World As We Know It, which I am far more proud of
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.cover/4433
Both of them are heavy BDSM and NC.
I appreciate any sort of feedback, at all.
As far as additions to the stories are concerned, my only requirement is that all of the branches and choices revolve around characters that the current player character must make. I don't want 'What does she find behind the door?' as the continuing question.
Cheers, all.