My First Two and a Shoutout

[PrevertOne]

Well, I posted my first two stories on Literotica and I like the response thus far. A debt of gratitude to Copperskink and Zebra 2001 UK for their help. My only issue was I noticed a couple of sentences missing from Porneau's Pet no.'s 4 and 5. They were there when I copied to the submit form; guess I missed it in the review. They don't effect the stories in any major way, just slightly alter the tone (very slightly). I like the fact that at least one or two parts are at hot status. Hope to post more stories soon.

Happy New Year People!

Prevert One

 

[jomar]

Well, I posted my first two stories on Literotica and I like the response thus far. A debt of gratitude to Copperskink and Zebra 2001 UK for their help. My only issue was I noticed a couple of sentences missing from Porneau's Pet no.'s 4 and 5. They were there when I copied to the submit form; guess I missed it in the review. They don't effect the stories in any major way, just slightly alter the tone (very slightly). I like the fact that at least one or two parts are at hot status. Hope to post more stories soon.

Happy New Year People!

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Congrats! And post a link.

Happy New Year!

 

[Guest]

Congrats! And post a link.

Happy New Year!

I'm showing eight stories by him

 

[driphoney]

I'm showing eight stories by him

Two stories, eight chapters.

 

[Guest]

Two stories, eight chapters.

DOH! I feel like a dumbass.

Got it. I haven't gotten past the editing stages on my second story. I'm still caught in that "one post, one story" crap. My thinking was narrow. I'm sorry. I was looking at it as "eight stories in two series"

~Paul

 

[jomar]

DOH! I feel like a dumbass.

Got it. I haven't gotten past the editing stages on my second story. I'm still caught in that "one post, one story" crap. My thinking was narrow. I'm sorry. I was looking at it as "eight stories in two series"

~Paul

Drop and give me twenty then police the parade grounds, soldier!

 

[driphoney]

Drop and give me twenty then police the parade grounds, soldier!

When was the last time anyone saw a sergeant drop and give twenty or police anything?

Aren't they the ones who make the others do that?

 

[Guest]

When was the last time anyone saw a sergeant drop and give twenty or police anything?

Aren't they the ones who make the others do that?

Oh, no, I can be made to do pushups. It just takes someone with a lot more rank than myself and a really really good reason. Me, personally? I am a staff sergeant, and I haven't done pushups because of a fuckup in years. Instead, I get sat down and talked to shown my deficiencies and I have to correct them.

But I have made other sergeants do pushups. usually for something related to safety. Pushups aren't my favorite punishment anyway. I can get MUCH more creative than that.

 

[ole_grouch_1124]

Knuckle pushups on uncooked rice. Oh, so nice!