My first submission

[darkdragonlover]

Hello everyone. I am new to this site and to erotic writing. I have been writing poetry for over 20 years and have had a few published. I have posted my first poem to the site and would like some feedback on it. Thank you for all your help

 

[WickedEve]

When your first poem is online, just post the link here, and I'm sure many of us will check it out and give you feedback--at least, I will.

 

[champagne1982]

Hello everyone. I am new to this site and to erotic writing. I have been writing poetry for over 20 years and have had a few published. I have posted my first poem to the site and would like some feedback on it. Thank you for all your help

Welcome to the forum darkdragonlover. If you'd like to see how I turned your nickname into a link to your member page just click the "quote" button on the bottom right of this window and you'll see the html tags for the vB scripts running on the bulletin boards.

Looking forward to reading some of your work.

 

[tarablackwood22]

Hello everyone. I am new to this site and to erotic writing. I have been writing poetry for over 20 years and have had a few published. I have posted my first poem to the site and would like some feedback on it. Thank you for all your help

Welcome. Look forward to reading your poetry.


Born Too Late - new poem......please read!

even now - new poem......please read.

 

[Liar]

Hi and welcome!

I placed a vote that I want to see all kinds of poetry from you. I have no idea what it looks like yet or if it's good or bad. But hey, any poetry is better than no poetry, so write and share.

cheers!
#L

 

[fawnie]

welcome to this fine community of poetic guru's..among other things
i'm rather new here myself..my poetry's not but the forums are a whole new world..pull up a chair, pour a cup of coffee, or shot of vodka, and enjoy the show!

 

[darkdragonlover]

here are the links to two of the poems that have been posted so far.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=149877

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=149849

darkdragonlover

 

[WickedEve]

Thanks for sharing your poetry

I left you a public comment on one.
I'll read the other one later.