My first story!!!!!

[KinkyKiki]

I just submitted my first story ever. It's called "Michelle's bath time" Whenever it is posted in the next couple days will you guys please read it and give me your opinion? Please keep in mind it's my first try. Thanks so much all!!!

 

[nitengale]

KinkyKiki...

Congrats on your first story endeavor!

There is a section (forum) here called Poetry and Story Feedback which is the BESTEST place to ask for feedback...so take this request there, and if you add the link for the folks who like it easy, the chance for feedback will increase!!

GOOD LUCK! ...and happy writing!

 

[cymbidia]

Don't post your story announcements and exhortations for readers and feedback in this forum.

It's the WRONG place for it.

http://www.literotica.com/forum/showthread.php?postid=533842#post533842

 

[nitengale]

cym...

Was my post not clear enough for Kinky??

...and you need to come home!

 

[cymbidia]

No, darlin'; you were way too nice (as you always are). I'm getting really irritated at these story intro's done in this forum. Or maybe i'm pms'ing and this whole subject looks like a helluva good target. Hmmm.

And i'm coming home, tonight.
~h,ns~
b.