My first story

[Jetta_Wales]

I have not written much before and though I'm often making stories in my head as I am a perpetual day dreamer I have not put pen to paper for an erotic story before.

I have really enjoyed writting though and have just finished the first part of my story. It is based in the TV series 24 and involves everything from Romance to BDSM but I've tried very hard to make the story as gripping and believable for it's events as much as for the sex.

I would really like it if someone could have a read of my story for me before I submit to be posted so I could get a little objective feedback. I am not looking for an editor just soeone to brows my story and briefly tell me what they think.

I f anyone would be interested please post back so I can send you my story.

 

[MichelleNJ]

Congradulations.... Hope you acheive success with your work

 

[cantdog]

I have not written much before and though I'm often making stories in my head as I am a perpetual day dreamer I have not put pen to paper for an erotic story before.

I have really enjoyed writting though and have just finished the first part of my story. It is based in the TV series 24 and involves everything from Romance to BDSM but I've tried very hard to make the story as gripping and believable for it's events as much as for the sex.

I would really like it if someone could have a read of my story for me before I submit to be posted so I could get a little objective feedback. I am not looking for an editor just soeone to brows my story and briefly tell me what they think.

I f anyone would be interested please post back so I can send you my story.

How lengthy is it? Do you know about the formatting requirements for stories posted to Lit.? PM me.

 

[Guest]

Welcome to the board!

Be feel free to shite on my threads!