My First Story

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My First story
Hello,
I'm working on my first short story and have the first chapter done. I'm looking for someone kind enough to read it, help me fix it, or just be honest and say hang it up. Thank you for your time in advance.

Beth

 

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My First story
Hello,
I'm working on my first short story and have the first chapter done. I'm looking for someone kind enough to read it, help me fix it, or just be honest and say hang it up. Thank you for your time in advance.

Beth

PM if you need any more help... I'm no expert but will willingly cast an eye over it.