My First story

[ezlay_2nite]

Hello,
I'm working on my first short story and have the first chapter done. I'm looking for someone kind enough to read it, help me fix it, or just be honest and say hang it up. Thank you for your time in advance. Please excuse me if this is posted in the wrong spot.

Beth

 

[cantdog]

I don't know. I think the AH was a good one, and I think maybe the Story Feedback would make sense, too.

But it doesn't matter. I've PM'ed you. Go to the Control Panel link, in blue, at the header of the thread here, and then push the Private Messages button.

Always willing to help.


cantdog