my first story

[Countess DeWinter]

this is even more exciting than reaching literotica gurudom! My first story was posted yesterday...


http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=4568

comments welcome, but author is prone to not taking negative criticism well...

 

[Ezzy]

Well...

comments welcome, but author is prone to not taking negative criticism well...

I must say I have not read it yet, but I think it is the best writen story I haven't read yet this week, I especially liked the way you began at the start, wrote right through the middle, then brought it to a close at the end.


My hearty congratulations on your hard worked well crafted story.


EZ http://cgi.tripod.com/smilecwm/cgi-bin/s/cwm2/sleep.gif

Ps now 14 hours later and I have read it, I didnt change my mind I still think it is the best I have read this week.


[Edited by Ezzy on 12-02-2000 at 05:19 PM]

 

[Countess DeWinter]

Thank you sooooo much Ezzy! I know I will be able to continue in this fine tradition thanks to your noble criticism Silliness is always welcome *kiss kiss*

 

[R Nitelight]

Countess DeWinter

Ummmm.....
I haven't read it either, Countess.
(Nitelight puckers up)


On a serious note, I look forward to reading it. I have experienced your gift for writing first hand, and I am confident that I am in for a first-rate erotic entertainment.

 

[Countess DeWinter]

*checking for BB, okay, puckering up and planting a big wet one on Nitelight*

THAT was one for the record books!

 

[CW]

VERY well written Countess.

Nice mingling of current terms with historical ones ( as in mother's age),,, just a shade weak on character development,, maybe just a few more sentences would have rounded out Maggie more. Nice ending,,, not a shocker, but still a surprise of sorts.

All in all very well done.

Now that you are published, will there be more stories forthcoming?

 

[Arby]

My First Story

Countess Dewinter,


The first thing I did was hit the link to "Rescued".
Then made my way back through the editorial liscense left on the path by Ezzu, And Nightlite.

You managed to hold my hand through your story. Just what I would have hoped to do with my first story.

I'm certain you will post many more of the same high Quality
soon.

Keep up the good work!!!

Arby

 

[Countess DeWinter]

Thanks CW and Arby
I've got a few more waiting like little pagent contestants in the wings. Hopefully, they'll be posted soon.

 

[Temptress_1960]

Great story

I loved the story. Congratulations!

I can't wait to read your others. Hope they're posted soon.
Really nice descriptions. And the scene where she and Rafe get together is very hot.

 

[forgetunome]

Countess DeWinter

Enjoyed the story....I look forward to your others!

 

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

Congrats!

I too, loved your story, Countess. It was beautifully written in every sense of the word. You have incredible talent for a beginner, keep up the great work! I look forward to your next submissions.

Hugs Kat