My First Story

[Flhotwifehub]

I have written my first story, I would like to find a editor that would be willing to review, edit, and any other suggestions for it. It involves a married couple where they have a fantasy for the wife to play a hooker at a truckstop. It mostly involves exhibitionism of her in her pantyhose. The story came to me naturally but I seem to have a hard time developing and describing characters. Any help there would be appreciated along with a edit.

 

[_Lynn_]

I have written my first story, I would like to find a editor that would be willing to review, edit, and any other suggestions for it. It involves a married couple where they have a fantasy for the wife to play a hooker at a truckstop. It mostly involves exhibitionism of her in her pantyhose. The story came to me naturally but I seem to have a hard time developing and describing characters. Any help there would be appreciated along with a edit.

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[Flhotwifehub]

Thanks Lynn, I did not have it checked, do now, Thanks again.