My first story. What do you think?

[Khawk]

My first story. What do you think? Help my future stories be better.

Hello all,

I have just had my first story put on this site. I would like to know what you think of it. What did I do wrong? What did I do right? Any info will help me improve future stories.

Here is the link. http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=196253
Literotica.com - Incest/Taboo - The Tree House

Thanks,

~K

 

[Khawk]

Thank you for your thoughts. I agree that my grammar/puncuation left a lot to be desired. I wrote this story in four hours, and tried to edit it myself. Editing isn't my strong suit. I will run my next story through an editor.

Any more thought? I want readers to fully enjoy my stories. My next story is almost done, so if you have a thought on how I can make my stories better, please let me know.

Thank you,
~k