My First Story Was Posted.....

[MrRodgersNeighbor]

Please check it out if you can and give me some feedback....

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=46947

It was the first story I wrote, and was posted, sooooooo needless to say I'm getting a fat here right now, and my girlfriend believes I should have it popped....

 

[Guest]

Your Girlfriend..

Must be quiet lucky...

 

[MrRodgersNeighbor]

Just For The Record

I submitted the story to be placed in Erotic Couplings, it just isn't strong enough on the BDSM side, to me, to have been placed in BDSM. It was actually written as an erotic story with BDSM in the story, I know that if it's read with the assumption that it's supposed to be a BDSM story it is a lame one.


And no.... I'm the lucky one.
My girlfriend has a pain in the ass in me as her boyfriend!

 

[Chicklet]

Please check it out if you can and give me some feedback....

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=46947

You might want to place this in the story feedback forum. About it being placed in another section...well, I'm no expert. I think sometimes things get sorted oddly - I see BDSM in lesbian sex, in erotic coupling...I see things all mixed up. Sometimes when I read BDSM though, I'm not looking for something too rough, but when I look at the other sections I'm certainly not expecting it. One of my stories got put in the extreme section, which surprised me, but I don't mind...people do their jobs as best they can, right? Good luck!

Chicklet

 

[MrRodgersNeighbor]

ahhhh... hey thanks