My First Story.....Need some feedback please

[gogogirl79]

Hi Everyone!

I am awaiting the publication of my first story and would appreciate some feedback on what I have written.
I tried to develop the characters as much as possible, while also keeping it focused on the story's point.

I am not sure how to attach a file as it seems to not like word and I am not sure how to convert it any other way. ??

Thoughts please......

 

[TheWritingGroup]

You're really better off linking to the story (once it's published).

--Annie

 

[gogogirl79]

You're really better off linking to the story (once it's published).

--Annie

Thank you Annie! I wish it was much easier.

 

[HaralLuhhan]

You could ask for volunteers to proof read or edit the story. I could but would want to know more about the story. You can send me a 'conversation' and tell me more about it if you want, and then decide whether you want to share emails so I could take a look.