My first story! (mother/son/voyeur- feedback please)

[HeyAll]

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=498457

-Is it too sappy?

-Thoughts on the ending?

-Thoughts on the characters having no names?


And I hope you enjoyed reading it.


Cheers

 

[ignorantslut69]

mom and son are good enough, great first time out