My first story is posted.

[snake307]

Friends, my first story is now posted. Shred it, and me, all you want. I have very thick skin, so no fear. It's my first posted effort, and I'm certain it could be better. Probably could be a lot better.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=314880&page=1

Thanks friends,

 

[jomar]

Hi Snake, welcome to Lit. The proper forum for this thread is the Story Feedback forum. You'll get what you're looking for there. Good luck.