My first story in Lit- Underworld, BDSM- looking for feedback

[Binah]

Hello,
I am new here and thought I would ask for a little feedback on my current project- a BDSM themed chapter series. You can reach it in my signature...

Thank you


Binah

 

[Safe_Bet]

Wrong forum there, hon. You want the Story Feedback Forum.

 

[champagne1982]

It's ok SB. I suspect Binah's just shotgunning her submission all over the boards. If you use birdshot you're bound to hit the target eventually.