My first story-idea thread

[midwestyankee]

The other night I got an idea for an erotic story that I'd like to run past folks on Lit.

A man wakes up in the middle of the night to find his wife's right leg splayed out over his left, leaving her pussy open and available. He's horny and wants to stroke her but is stricken by a shred of conscience. Unusual for him as he's a typical direct sort of fellow from the old "find 'em, feel 'em, fuck 'em and forget 'em" school, but he strokes her very gently. He gets aroused; she does too, but doesn't wake.

A few nights later he wakes at 2 am to find his wife's leg in the same position. Tempted once again, but also stricken by his conscience again, he gets out of bed to wash his hands and trim his nails first.

This continues for a series of apparently clandestine sessions of stroke-the-pussy. But before he can bring himself to take advantage of his wife each time, he makes some change in himself that makes him a better lover. And each time his actions are bolder.

I'm leaning toward a twist at the end to reveal that the wife was aware of his activities - and his learning - all along.

I haven't worked out any more details, though I have a few more of the scenes sketched out rougly.

I'd really appreciate any thoughts my fellow Lit readers might have. Thanks.

 

[Colleen Thomas]

I read a story in similar thme once entitled the Incubus. For those not up on your demons an Incubus is the male form of a Sucubus. Both are demons who come in the night to copulate with mortals. The interesting twist here was that the author postulated that such clandestine encounters as you describe are actually the seeds from which the Incubus/Succubus legends evolved.

I know from experience that you can change the direction of someone's dreams by such sex play. I had a lover long ago who suffered from nightmares. Whenever I awoke to her having one I would gently fondle or stroke her, nothing neccissarily overt, but in time she noted that she was having a lot mroe erotic dreams than nightmares.

It would make for a very good story if someone has the time.

Colly

 

[sirhugs]

I agree that its beats the usual Lit stroker plots ( if you wonder what they are, read my stories). But it will need to be done well to work. And sorry, no help here with your twist.

 

[LustiRusti]

I love your idea midwestyankee! It sounds like it could be a very fun story.

It could go the way you stated about the wife actually being awake and knowing what her husband was doing, and basically using him for some sexual release that way, or once awake the wife could confide in her husband that the dream she had the night before was so erotic and it "seemed so real". Smiling, the husband could ask her to go on and tell him what she dreamt. Then, as you mentioned the husband becomes a better lover to his wife from his late night games, he could help feed her fantasies (dreams) with bolder touchings.



~Kenzie

 

[midwestyankee]

Colleen, SirHugs, and RustiLusti,

Thanks for the feedback.

Glad to know the idea wasn't completely off the wall. The more I think about it, the more I think I read a story by Anais Nin with a similar situation. That may be where I got the idea for the twist at the end where the wife turns out to have been aware of the sexual activity most of the time.

Now I just have to find some time to put some flesh on these spare bones.

Thanks again.