my first story - 'Finally'

[open assed slut]

if anyone would like to, please read my first story - 'finally'. i really enjoyed writing it, and from the few feedbacks i've received you have enjoyed it too! i'd really appreciate anyone elses views on it and comments on their favourite parts. hopefully i'll be writing a few more soon for you all to enjoy. thanx

 

[NoJo]

Here is the story.

 

[openassguy]

Oooh, I enjoyed that. If you keep writing like that you'll definately be someone to watch! Was the story based on a real life experience?

 

[open assed slut]

thanx

to sub joe, thanx for leaving that link! me being the silly person i am forgot that part! well i am new to all this so u all have to forgive me! thanx again!

 

[open assed slut]

to openassguy (we have such similar names - scary huh!), thanx for ur reply! the story is kind of based on a true one, its something i hope will happen with the guy in the story when i meet him and i hope he wants it all to happen aswell. which i'm sure he does! x

 

[Starlight13]

Lovely story - hot and erotic (although being a hetro male I must confess to skipping certain bits... ugh). My only (minor) critism would be that maybe there was a little too much going on. If the aim of the story is to simply relate actual events, that is fine (and your a lucky girl) but if the aid is to turn somebody on, sometimes simpler can be better, working towards the climax (pun intended).
I loved the loo bit - and wanted the anal to follow quickly - but had to wait (and skip bit) to reach the reward. Don't let me put you off! It was a great story, and well written. I hope you write many more!

 

[open assed slut]

thanx for the comments starlight13.

the story isn't actually based on actual events (yet) but hopefully these fantasties are going to become reality very soon. its based on what i hope me and neil will be doing to each other soon although i know it might not go exactly to plan!

And when we get the chance to meet, i'm going to be writing about what we get up to, so i hope that u'll come back and read that too and hopefully u will enjoy it!

thanx again!

 

[ANiceGuy]

Did I miss....

Is there a link to the story. sounds interesting butt....

 

[open assed slut]

i forgot to put the link in the original msg but sub joe left one or u can get it from here too! hope u enjoy!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=56907

 

[ANiceGuy]

I won't miss your story again.

I read it twice, I ran out of Puffs the first time and had to go back after calling wally World and getting another truck load delivered.

Keep the stories cuming and i'll keep cumming too! hehehe

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=2056

ANiceGuy