Hi all. Just letting you all know that I have just submitted an edited version of the story. I fixed some of the spelling and grammar errors and such.
For those who haven't read it, the story can be found at:
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=273405
Feel free to let me know what you all think, and keep an eye out for the updated version! (The link may change).
For those who haven't read it, the story can be found at:
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=273405
Feel free to let me know what you all think, and keep an eye out for the updated version! (The link may change).
