My First Story at Literotica!

[SexySecretary]

I just got my first story at Literotica! Seeing my byline and knowing I wrote it just has me thrilled to death. Anybody who reads it I would love to have your feedback. It's in the new section and it's called The Boss Notices His Secretary . . . In A Different Light.

 

[WriterDom]

A true story?...
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=18486

 

[SexySecretary]

Reply to WriterDom

No, not a true story -- but I really am a secretary.

 

[Guest]

Sexy Secretary

Hey "Sexy-sec".......You're story wasn't that bad for fresh out of the chute. (Believe me...have only been posting since the 1st of March)...and some of MY first didn't do well AT ALL! But....with a
little help and some constructive critisim....and ALOT of support,
I've kept going....and hopefully kept improving.

I don't know....read my earlier stories...and compare them to the newer ones. You tell me!

<smile>

Thesandman

 

[SexySecretary]

Hey Sandman

I'm going to read them right now!

 

[flawed_ethics]

Not bad

Not bad for a first two stories. Not a lot leading up to it though, you're characters are pretty horny and to the point (a relefction? lol). Anyway, I thought they were pretty good for first runs too. I'm new to writing myself, so its nice to see how others are starting themselves off too.

Kudos and keep up the good work!

-flawed_ethics

 

[SexySecretary]

A reflection on myself, because I'm pretty horny and to the point, I am just like my characters!

 

[Guest]

Pretty horny?

Interesting thought....

As I always seem to be as well.

 

[Bob Peale]

S,

Took a look. Fun story; you have mail.