My First Story Arrives!! Cum One, Cum All!

Miranda Reigns

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I'm so excited, I could just spit! Why else would I be up at 6:30 on a Sunday morning!!! Although it is hard to find since the Member's Profiles section appears to be missing this morning, my very first story has been added to the website. Do you know how hard it is to type while jumping up and down yelling, "Yippee Skippee?!" Anyway, knowing that I could be opening myself up for a roasting, I invite everyone to go find and read my story. I found it this morning via the "New" section, titled "Indefinable Indiscretions," and added on 12/9/00. It's about 50 titles down from the top. If you have any trouble finding it, try this link.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=5021
Isabella, hon ... now it's your chance to read it without all those screwed up characters imbedded in the middle of the text!
Ah ... now I feel like a true literotican! :)
I hope everyone enjoys how my twisted, perverted little brain works! XXXOOO
 
Holy Shit Miranda. That is your first story? Wow. I had to stop twice just to, umm, take a break. Is there anyway I can get a copy of the video? Please tell me there is more. You have a genuine gift with words, imagery, emotion.
 
More to come?

Merelan ... whew ... thank you, thank you, thank you for being the first to reply and with such nice things to say!! I know not everyone is going to feel the same way, but it's great to have the first feedback as positive. Now, as far as it being my first story, it's my first for LITEROTICA. I actually have two, full-length erotic novels out there. Take a looksie at my profile ... it tells all about it. (That's if you can find it!! Profiles appear to be missing this morning.) And, as far as that video ... don't I wish! "It's just my imagination ... running away with me ... Oh it's just my imagination ......." hehehehe
I'll get started on my next story as soon as inspriation strikes ...... ;)
XXXOOO
 
WOW, what a story.............my real name is Don by the way!!
 
I would have to say that you either have one helluva story from RL or an awesome imagination. I started to read the story and could not stop until the end. Good job.
 
Purrrrrr ... thank you Chuckus

Now ... tell me that the woodchuck was sporting some wood while he read, and I'll be really flattered ... ;)
xxxooo
 
Re: Purrrrrr ... thank you Chuckus

Miranda Reigns said:
Now ... tell me that the woodchuck was sporting some wood while he read, and I'll be really flattered ... ;)
xxxooo

Ma'am you could have hung many a towel of that towel bar......full attention!!!!
 
Let me get this straight. You people made up names?

[Edited by R Nitelight on 12-10-2000 at 07:49 AM]
 
R Nitelight

I know hard to believe ain't it? LOL
 
Ssssssssizzzzzzzzzzzzzzle

Congratulations Miranda, darling ... :)

Your story is soooooooo hot ... the way Don talks to you ... well ... it is exactly what turns me on ... it makes me melt, makes me wet, makes me ... well ummmm what can i say .....

You are indefinabley hot Miranda ... your indiscretions sizzle, girlfriend! ;)
 
While the subject is not particularly my 'cup of tea', I found your story very well written, provocative and stimulating. Structure and word usage I thought were impressive for most any venue, not just an erotic story site.

You have a marvelous command of the language and the ability to conjure some impressive mental images. For your first effort, you have produced an impressive result.

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Ditto, very good writing!
 
Isabella, you sexy thang .....

you make me blush, girlfriend! I'm glad you found my story sizzling ... now, as for Don ... well, I can hook ya up if you dare ..... ;)
Unclebill and Curious Guy ... I appreciate your confidence- boosting praise ... makes me want to attempt a story that "Oprah" would approve! ;)
xxxooo
 
I did not mean to be negative in any way. I was merely complimenting your writing abilities. The sexual content was just not of a variety that interests me.
 
Curious Guy

I was being sincere, hon! I was thanking you ... not being sarcastic. I'm serious about trying to write something other than erotica someday ... and you two helped to encourage me.
xxxooo
 
I read it already!!!!!

Babe congrats... you know what I think about it already.
I think Merelan had the right idea... but she always does.
 
Howdy Chef

Long time no see! Oh, wait, that's my fault ... hehehehehe
Thanks for posting ... your opinion means the world to me!
Thanks to you, too, Guru!
xxxooo
 
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