mikey2much
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I got this review, while I am glad to be reviewed, the results don't exactly stroke my ego. It sounds almost like they liked the story but my delivery stunk. What would you think if it happened to you? The reviewer was Fuzzy Wuzzy. I think he was with Stories On Line.
Here is a copy of the review:
This is by a new Author, and with the novelty of the
writing comes the novelty of the plot. Rita is one of
those faceless women who somehow get lost in the
crunch. She is a part time whore, a part time bag
lady, a part time crack addict, and for a buck or more
she would fuck anything on two feet. But she was her
own woman, and her independence gave her the fortitude
to live through her life of hell! Until she meets up
with her nemesis, and survives against all odds!
This is without a doubt a snuffer; and the sex is
powerful and disgustingly degrading. It is set in the
Everglades, and is the deepest hell a man can fall
into.
Even so, enjoy!
Numerical Scores given:
Stroke : 9
Plot : 10
Quality: 5
Appeal : 10
Here is a copy of the review:
This is by a new Author, and with the novelty of the
writing comes the novelty of the plot. Rita is one of
those faceless women who somehow get lost in the
crunch. She is a part time whore, a part time bag
lady, a part time crack addict, and for a buck or more
she would fuck anything on two feet. But she was her
own woman, and her independence gave her the fortitude
to live through her life of hell! Until she meets up
with her nemesis, and survives against all odds!
This is without a doubt a snuffer; and the sex is
powerful and disgustingly degrading. It is set in the
Everglades, and is the deepest hell a man can fall
into.
Even so, enjoy!
Numerical Scores given:
Stroke : 9
Plot : 10
Quality: 5
Appeal : 10
