My first posting and my first story.

[jill999]

Hi everyone,

I'm Jill; and this is my first attempt to post anything here at Literotica. I have participated in a few other forums so I hope some of my friends from those forums are members here as well. I would love to hear from as many of you as possible.

I posted a new story here which represents the first of my works posted on this site. It is "The Cost of True Love." It is an erotic mystery which contains some of my favorite sexual combinations including brother-sister and of course my personal choice of girl-girl.

The story is about 25,000 words so it will take a little bit of time to read. I think for most readers it will be about an hour or maybe less. There is an interesting plot twist so please don't read the ending first.

I hope to make lots of friends here and look forward to any feedback.

Hugs and kisses,

Jill

 

[minsue]

Welcome, Jill

 

[yui]

Hi everyone,

I'm Jill; and this is my first attempt to post anything here at Literotica. I have participated in a few other forums so I hope some of my friends from those forums are members here as well. I would love to hear from as many of you as possible.

I posted a new story here which represents the first of my works posted on this site. It is "The Cost of True Love." It is an erotic mystery which contains some of my favorite sexual combinations including brother-sister and of course my personal choice of girl-girl.

The story is about 25,000 words so it will take a little bit of time to read. I think for most readers it will be about an hour or maybe less. There is an interesting plot twist so please don't read the ending first.

I hope to make lots of friends here and look forward to any feedback.

Hugs and kisses,

Jill

Hi, Jill, and welcome to the AH! Here's a link for your story - "The Cost of True Love".

Luck to you,

Yui

P.S. You can quote my post and cut and paste the link to your sig. I would tell you how to do that, but to be honest, with the new layout, there are too many variables. You can access your sig under the User CP (I think) and after that it should just be cut and paste.

 

[Guest]

 

[yui]

Hi Jill,

Welcome to the AH and congrats on your first story.

I would recommend that you check out the newbies thread - lots of good info there. I just hope some of the new formatting around here doesn't make the advice there obsolete.

For those interested, here's the link to Jill's story:

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=185681

Uh-oh, did the link to her story in my post not work?! I wonder if it's the new formatting/different skins because it worked for me when I tested it.

 

[cheerful_deviant]

Uh-oh, did the link to her story in my post not work?! I wonder if it's the new formatting/different skins because it worked for me when I tested it.

Your's works fine. Lime just can't read apparently.


Just kidding Lime.

 

[Guest]

Your's works fine. Lime just can't read apparently.


Just kidding Lime.

Nah. Lime just puts the cart before the horse and makes the horse walk back'ards.

He prob'ly hit the reply button and THEN went looking for the story. Byt the time he found it and finished his post Yui had beat him by ten minutes.

 

[gauchecritic]

Your's works fine. Lime just can't read apparently.


Just kidding Lime.

No, you're quite right CD, Lime can't read, or at least that's what he tells MrsLime when he makes her sit on his lap and read out the stories.


Edited to add: Eyup Jill, come in, sit down, take your shoes off, stay awhile.

 

[Guest]

 

[Blackie Malone]

Welcome Jill.

 

[eric shawn listo]

Welcome, Jill.

I don't have time now to read your story but will when I get the chance.

Now, should I use Yui's link or Lime's....decisions....decisions...

 

[yui]

Your's works fine. Lime just can't read apparently.

Thank you for checking!

Byt the time he found it and finished his post Yui had beat him by ten minutes.

To be honest, that is why I thought the link might be broken - there was eleven minutes between Lime's post and mine so I knew we hadn't posted on top of each other...

Some people around here think I should be working.

Foolish minions! Can't they see you have better things to do? Grrr!

No problem, I was just confused.

Now, should I use Yui's link or Lime's....decisions....decisions...

Click me! Click me! Click me!

 

[Guest]

 

[jill999]

Hi, Jill, and welcome to the AH! Here's a link for your story - "The Cost of True Love".

Luck to you,

Yui

P.S. You can quote my post and cut and paste the link to your sig. I would tell you how to do that, but to be honest, with the new layout, there are too many variables. You can access your sig under the User CP (I think) and after that it should just be cut and paste.

Thanks so much Yui, I will cut and paste it into my signature per your sugestion.

Jill

 

[jill999]

I also want to thank the following for welcoming me to this forum:

minsue
Lime
Cheerful deviant
Dranoel
gauchecritic
Blackie Malone
eric shawn listo


I hope I recorded your names correctly. You were all very nice to take the time to help me feel at home here.

I would love to see any comments in regards to my story if you have an opportunity to do so. Erotic writing is a challenge for me when it comes to the sex act itself. The rest comes fairly easily to me because it follows a similiar plot to most of the romance stories I write.

Don't be shy, constructive criticism is very welcome.

Jill

 

[pop_54]

Welcome to the madhouse Jill I'll check out your story a bit later.