My first posted story

[FingerTwister]

Greetings and Salutations all! I've been reading stories here off and on for quite a while, and thought I'd try my hand at it. Please take a look at

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=189427

and let me know what you think. Any advice or comments are greatly appreciated.

Thank you, Your Humble Narrator,
Alex

 

[Guest]

Hi FingerTwister,

I left you some feedback about this story in a thread you started on the AH, but was so impressed with this, your first story, that I thought I'd say something here, too.

It is a very good story; hot, fast paced, and well written. The fucking is fast and furious, just as it is for illicit lovers. Definitely the kind of thing that "does it" for me. While the story is short, I still got to know the characters and you displayed their motivations very well indeed, by giving just enough back story. Sometimes back story can be over-done, but you got that just right.

Thank you. Please write more!

Lou