My First Incest Story

[NaughtyMike]

With all the attention given to incest stories, I opted to have my main character fuck his mother and get a blow job from his sister. (Mike returns home.) In 1 day I had 23,000 hits with 64 votes. That is more votes than any of my other 2 stories combined. I referenced my other stories as well in the opening paragraph. I stated that all my stories fit together to form a long novel with the same character. If they liked my style of writing, they should visit my other stories and I outlined a chronological sequence to them. This worked well. The hits on my other stories are running about 3 times normal. I actually got votes on old stories (something that doesn't happen too often). It looks like one person went down my list and gave them all a "5". I also had several feedbacks on the story, and one feedback on an older story. One guy wrote that he was a stingy bastard when it came to voting and claimed he gave me his first "5" ever (average an honest 3.72 with 64 votes-I'll take it.)

The story is longer than what I like. Personally I like 1 full single page story, but apparently not everyone is like me. One gentleman ( I assume male by the e-maill address) complained it had too much style/ story line to be good porno.

I had a similar complaint/complement that it was difficult to beat off while laughing (Nancy the Drama Teacher.)

I balked at writing an incest story. I felt uneasy about writing about sex with my mother ( a blow job from my sister came quite easily- I only use real characters.)

I am glad I did now as I have made a few more"hard core" loyal fans which I view more as a cult following.

I don't plan on doing anymore incest stories. I broke from the incest norm in my story- my character actually felt guilty about having sex with his mother and didn't go on to produce a joyous family gang fucking. I try to make my stories believable- but push them to the limit. One feed back (Terry Takes on the Navy) seemed to have been convinced that the story was true. I actually stated the story was true by using the navy phrase "this is a no shitter". As any Navy man can tell you, that phrase is the equilvalent to "once upon a time."

I recommend that if you want to be widely read, tap into the incest crowd. Apparently there is a large group of readers who read nothing but incest stories. If they like your stlye of writing, some will stray out of their genre. And oh yes-be afraid, be very afraid.

 

[macdanife2000]

Interest in Incest

I know the feeling, I've posted 5 stories and the three regarding incest, though it isn't incest, have attracted the most views, votes and responses.

I researched the most popular story lines and was very suprised to find that Incest was almost 5 to 1.

I personally don't enjoy Incest stories, I guess I could never imagine having sex with a parent or sibling. (Though some of my cousins would qualify)

The fact that guilt came into it was a nice touch by the way, so don't despair on the content of your writing. As you deveop a readership they will follow wherever you may go I'm sure.

 

[Quint]

I am fairly revolted by the thought of incest, and I write primarily for me so I don't think I'll ever sink that low. The only subgenre I can tolerate in incest deals with people no closer than cousins.

I do want a nice readership of my own, which is unlikely at the moment since:
a.) I only have 2 things up (and a third on the way).
2.) Two of those 3 are "How-To's."
d.) The third is part of a medium-sized story which has elements of group sex, masturbation, romance, and a little BDSM in it--so for the lack of anything better I stuck it in "Novels and Novellas." It was that or "Erotic Couplings," and my poor little story would be swallowed faster than a 4" cock amidst all those other stories. Sigh....

It's kind of discouraging being a new writer with scruples.

 

[NaughtyMike]

Gee Quint- I thought ever guy had a fantasy about giving Mom a Hot Carl.

 

[its Leslie]

Hey Mike congradulations from that "stingy bastard" heheh (was surprised to actually see my quip there heheh).

Take a pointer though from the bible eh, adam and eve created all of humanity (or so they say, and the bible is 100% accurate according to them).
Lets see...one mated pair, hmmmmmm......
Its simple logic really, you can't get a lot of people generated if you are balking at the idea of giving it to mom and your sisters. Actually even I don't need sex that often. Man that must have been a good deal of fucking.

And the bible is a repeat offender eh, remember Noah's ark (everyone else was like dead eh).

No I will never sell my sister on going all the way and ditching the underwear (damn fine looking girl my sister). She made me squirt a few times in my youth in prvate in the bathroom whether she likes it or not though (shed kill me if she ever discovered that detail though).

I am not overly interested in incest stories over any other I suppose. As long as the sex is basically ordinary sex I like it I guess. Glad I don't have a daughter (some things I would rather leave unknown about myself). But I don't think I would refuse my sister (course I have it easy, she's the most attractive woman I know).

 

[Quint]

Gee Quint- I thought ever guy had a fantasy about giving Mom a Hot Carl.

Maybe they do...me being female an' all, I wouldn't know. I've never fantasized about my brother or my father. I know it's largely a social thing, but God, why the hell would I want to anyway? There are all sorts of fuckable guys that won't make my children mutants.

 

[wildsweetone]

...interesting

I balked at writing an incest story. I felt uneasy about writing about sex with my mother ( a blow job from my sister came quite easily- I only use real characters.) - Naughty Mike

i too feel uneasy about writing an incest story. partly because i don't need the weirdos chasing me around the net, and partly because i'm scared to death to let my mind loose on the topic.

therein lies the push and the pull.

 

[its Leslie]

Heheheehh

Well its to late for me. I let mind mind out a while back and I have had no success getting it to come back inside.

I don't think there is any thought that hasnt occured to my imagination. I just don't write about some topics from a lack of interest. Certainly isn't from a lack of ability to write it.

 

[wildsweetone]

that'll be what it is... i probably lack the ability.

 

[NaughtyMike]

Sorry Quint. I ASSumed your name was short for Quinton.

 

[Quiet_Cool]

Speaking from experience...

Gee Quint- I thought ever guy had a fantasy about giving Mom a Hot Carl.

Nope, not even close!!!!

Not that I mind an incest story, but a story isn't reality, and I don't fantasize about my mom, and I never have.
I am working on a story that involves a couple cousins though, and I've read some of the stories and not minded the content.

maybe some of us are outside the "incest fold"...

 

[its Leslie]

The problem with fantasy, is it is engaged in by people in the real world heheh.

Yes when my sister walked around in just a t shirt and panties I did notice. And yes I lost a few loads after I noticed. That is the reality. The fantasy was what was in my head as I was squirting very real cum shots. But I was alone while indulging the fantasy (my sister will always do fantasy things, but the real sister, the one in the real world, sure as hell won't be doing any of the things in the fantasy).

We only have trouble here at literotica when we meet people that can't separate fact from myth, and fantasy from reality.

I have fantasised about everything that you can imagine (probably a few that you yourself might not admit to even yourself heheh). But I can see that the fantasy is fantasy (fortunately).

Firm grasp on reality here people. I have a 4.5 inch cock, balding, to much weight around middle, and can only cum once in the average day. I am no ones idea of a fantasy man (unless you like guys that actually do housework eh). But I sure can write a cool erotic fiction. To much imagination in my head I suppose.

I have been actually told my cyber is better than the real thing. Thats fact not fantasy. But then again, most guys are so lousy in bed that I am not overly challenged. Sadly that too is reality heheh.

2 plus months ago I was actually shocked that I could write credible erotica. Most of what I know is incredibly dry boring science generally.

 

[Whispersecret]

Not everything I write reflects a real life desire. I might write about a murder, but that don't mean I want to kill someone.

 

[its Leslie]

Well its true thoughts are not necessarily automatically deeds.

I have thought every thought imaginable, but what I can think is not necessrily what I would care to do either (I suppose).

I read how most women secretly fantasize about being raped, yet the media is full of women mentally scarred by the ordeal.

And yes rape is a horrifying experience. I have trouble writing fiction that is violent to women because it does not sit well with my psyche.

I have no trouble with the concept of killing (but I was in the military its a job description).

 

[wildsweetone]

I have thought every thought imaginable, but what I can think is not necessrily what I would care to do either (I suppose). - Its Leslie

isn't this what separates humans from animals, the ability to choose?

 

[NaughtyMike]

isn't this what separates humans from animals, the ability to choose?

No Sweet thing, animals can make choices as well as humans. I am not too sure about the concept of "free will". We are all what we are due to genetics and enviornment.

 

[its Leslie]

Alas the animal kingdom might be ahead of us in many ways too.

Although its not unheard of for them to war on each other, and we are not the only ones to engage in homosexual behaviour. Additionally we are not the only ones to ravage our surroundings, or engage in indescriminant killing.

Fortunately mankind is not the only species to mate loyally for life, nor the only creature capable of amazing feats of mental capacity. We are not the strongest or fastest either.

But currently there are no other creatures on the planet that have split the atom, peered into space, erected temples to unseen forces, dominated the entire globe, gone from the vacumn of space to the ocean depths. Invented myriads of gadgets and wasted the building blocks of life on the ground while communicating with others through artificial means such as this medium.

Although I am unsure if that makes us "more" sentient.

 

[NaughtyMike]

Technology is what separates use from the other species of animals. Is that what you are saying?

 

[Guest]

Its not entirely just technology, but unfortunately, yes, it is damn close.

A whale can transmit more data faster farther and with greater accuracy than most of our best machines. We of course have no such capacity.

An ant can lift 12 times its weight and do it tirelessly all day. I have trouble walking to the mall some days carrying my own weight let alone anything else.

An eagle can spot a mouse moving from an incredible height. Me I suffer if I am expected to use a monitor screen that is less the 14 inches wide from 3 feet away (and I have excellent vision as compared to 80% of humanity).

I can put a man on the moon. Well some say the first landing was faked. Who cares. When the space shuttle can be launched on time and without hassle 100 times in a row I might give a shit. Till then I am not leaving this planet even if a rock is going to smash it to bits.

I can contemplate my existence in grand cathedrals to unseen "beings". Lot of good that has done for the persecuted millions over the years. And what do we get out of it. Assurances of an afterlife based on fuzzy warm feelings.

I can transmit an image of myself engaged in pumping my seed onto the floor to amuse a female of my species thousands of miles away. Might be fun, but it doesnt reeeeeally make me proud of my intellectual superiority.

As we speak we are raping this planet beyond belief. Its the only known place to live in the cosmos, but that doesn't seem to worry anyone. We would rather secure our temporary existence with short term goals like a job, instead of ensuring there is a point to having the job. If the human world has no future why care?

We can not put sunblock on the plankton. When our food supply and ecosystem stops functioning, guess what, we are living on borrowed time.

Not that it reeeeally matters. Mother nature has wiped almost all traces of life off of this life friendly rock several times already. Every now and then lately she has a good scrub with massive amounts of ice. She will remain, even if we don't.

Maybe we are more "capable" than most animals, but special, nope not special, merely dangerously clever.

I long ago lost me ability to sponsor the incredibly arrogant notion this world was made specifically for me. I am just a part of it nothing more.

Sorry if this was a bit gloomy, but well the goofball isn't always around, sometimes the real me is sitting here I guess.

 

[its Leslie]

Hmmm when you dump yer cookies you also lose your identity I keep forgetting, the last post was me.

 

[PrincessKatie]

Views!!!

I will end up writing Incest/Anal and Sci-Fi storys but for now I am focusing on Fetish and some Poetry.
Please look for PrincessKatie under members and check out my 2 storys-I am looking for feedback on them.

 

[Tawny T]

I enjoy writing incest. Hey, they are fiction and I enjoy letting my nasty mind free reign.

I like others, was amazed at how many reads I got with the incest stories. The first one got more votes than all my other stories combined. At that point I had written a lot of stories!

I do have one true incest story - My Very Loving Mother - told by a friend. I didn't condone of condemn them. I did talk to the mother involved as I wanted her input too so I could write a good well balanced account of their relationship. It has been going on now for over 10 years.

Incest is the stuff of fantasies for a LOT of people, men and women alike. Most do not indulge but there are a lot who think about it - that's for sure. Maybe that's why it's so popular.

 

[mlyn]

We are only human

You are so right. We are simply human, and we all make mistakes, or errors, or just screw up.

I have trouble writing incest stories, but I did it to see if I could get the same response as the others. I was blown away. I posted up higher before I saw this post, musing on why this is so popular. take care

 

[macdanife2000]

Naughty Mike

Great post

The whole incest thing has stirred up a beehive of activity.

Just Think! You're post started it all!! (recently)

Not only are you getting a lot of votes, but we'll all racing off to read your post, well most of us if we're honest. (I'll be going in a second to do just that)

I sometimes, no often, wish I never started with an incest story, maybe Gearge Lucas wanted to make romantic films about mature couple also but alas, Luke and Co proved too popular.

My advice, get in and get out. No pun intended. As you've probably noticed you atract a nice amount of "strange" email requests for stories.

Appreciate the release of entering another realm of creativity, then make sure Scotty beams you out!!!

If anyone has any ideas on how to do that, gracefully, I'd really, really appreciate!!!

Thanks folks