My first Gay short story, need feedback and help!

[ShortStoryLover]

Just wrote my first gay short story and would like help in feedback and how to format it to send into Literotica. Let me know and I’ll send you a copy. Thanks much

 

[NoJo]

Just wrote my first gay short story and would like help in feedback and how to format it to send into Literotica. Let me know and I’ll send you a copy. Thanks much

How many words long is it? Can certainly help with formatting + basic comments, though not on its hotness, not gay enough for that

 

[ShortStoryLover]

Thanks NoJo

Thank you for the quick reply! I’d say it was around 2,000 words. It’s a fairly quick read. It got rejected due to the dialogue punctuation. I’d appreciate another look before I re-submit the story. I think I fixed the problem areas, but I’m not 100% sure.

Thanks again,
Short Story Lover (SSL)

 

[NoJo]

Hi, send me a message on lit https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=115724&page=contact

I'll reply letting you know how you can get the storyto me,

Joe

 

[AlphaLyon]

Just wrote my first gay short story and would like help in feedback and how to format it to send into Literotica. Let me know and I’ll send you a copy. Thanks much

If you're still looking for help on this, message me and we can figure out the best way to get this edited. Good luck!