My first ever story

imaguy

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http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=406599

It's an incest/taboo about a brother and sister who grow/grew up with a violent single father.

The adversity he creates pushes them closer, and tears them apart at the same time.

Any Ideas, suggestons and constructive criticism is welcome.

Feel free to bash it. Regardless, this one needs a sequal, so I'm open to anything.
 
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