My fantasy

centrum1000

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Around this time of year for the past few years i've had a reoccurring fantasy that I can't get out of my head. I think I first got the idea from a few stories that i've read, but not of them have all of the elements that make it really work for me. Even though i'm writing this as my fantasy, which it is, I think that this would make a great story. I'm also curious if anyone else knows of any good stories along these lines.

My fantasy takes place on Halloween, maybe that why it starts to creep into my mind at this time of year. It involves dressing up in a sexy costume, something along the lines of a slutty dorothy or french maid, with a short skirt, silky panties, stockings, heels and a wig. I guess this is a good time to mention that i'm a guy. I've never had any sexual experiences with men, or even really fantasized bout it for that matter, but for some reason this story line is stuck in my head. Because it's halloween it's easy for me to get dressed up like this and go out in public. I would go to a bar, a party/college/frat party might work better for the story though, and make a very convincing woman. I end up hooking up with several guys through the night doing various things - blowjobs/handjobs/receive anal, but everyone thinks im a girl. At the end of the night a guy comes up to me who realizes that i'm not what i seem. He starts to rub me through my panties drops to his knees and proceeds to give me head. That pretty much sums it up.

From a story perspective there are a lot of variables. This could be voluntary or submissive/humil. My sister/wife/girlfriend might have caught me in panties and came up with the plan. Either way it is a first time experience.

I would love to act this out sometime, but I think reality would get in the way a bit so I am left with my imagination and stories.

Any thoughts?
 
The structure of the story is right there and since it is a fantasy of yours I strongly encourage you to attempt to write it yourself. That is the thing about personal stories, if someone else writes it, it won't have the same impact and you'll keep wanting someone to write it hoping the next time it hits all the notes you want in order to find it truly satisfying.

As a general crossdressing story I think it has good potential. I see this as a wife who is really trying to be GGG (good, giving, game) with her husband's desire and has allowed Halloween to be the day he gets to go 'all out'. She has her friend who is a stylist come over and together they put him through the full treatment, doing his hair (wig, extensions) and makeup in order to make him as passable as possible. He then dresses in his slutty maid costume and off he goes to hit the bars where the story hits all the sexual notes with the final act (in the bar) with the guy going done on him.

The actual ending would be the next morning as the wife strips the pillowcases off the bed, laughing and telling him they forgot to show him how to properly remove all the makeup so it doesn't get on the pillows. It would be a moment of normalcy showing her absolute acceptance.
 
The structure of the story is right there and since it is a fantasy of yours I strongly encourage you to attempt to write it yourself. That is the thing about personal stories, if someone else writes it, it won't have the same impact and you'll keep wanting someone to write it hoping the next time it hits all the notes you want in order to find it truly satisfying.

As a general crossdressing story I think it has good potential. I see this as a wife who is really trying to be GGG (good, giving, game) with her husband's desire and has allowed Halloween to be the day he gets to go 'all out'. She has her friend who is a stylist come over and together they put him through the full treatment, doing his hair (wig, extensions) and makeup in order to make him as passable as possible. He then dresses in his slutty maid costume and off he goes to hit the bars where the story hits all the sexual notes with the final act (in the bar) with the guy going done on him.

The actual ending would be the next morning as the wife strips the pillowcases off the bed, laughing and telling him they forgot to show him how to properly remove all the makeup so it doesn't get on the pillows. It would be a moment of normalcy showing her absolute acceptance.

I like your thoughts. Unfortunately, im no writer....

I also like the idea of several 1on1 encounters with unwitting straight men before the final encouter.
 
I like your thoughts. Unfortunately, im no writer....

I also like the idea of several 1on1 encounters with unwitting straight men before the final encouter.


Everyone who hasn't written says they aren't a writer. Do this... write out the experiences, no plot, no dialog. Just write down what happens in each encounter, even if you do it in a very mechanical sort of way. It won't be a story but you will have started. At that point it is just a matter of writing down what happened to get to that point and then if you want it complete, writing down what happens afterwards. You may only end up with a 300 to 400 word story, but each time you read it, add fun details. If what you've written is a fantasy of yours, you should be able to visualize it quite well.

I know this is Story Ideas, not How To Write, but the world is enriched by the diversity of expression.
 
I'd encourage you to try and write it yourself. it's obviously your fantasy, who better to know what you want in it?
I'm rather new to this writing stuff myself, yet I've come to really like it and I've seen myself grow and get better.
If you are not 100% sure you can always ask for a serious proofreader, someone who's willing to help you make it what you want it to be. And/or get a good editor, there are usually a few lurking about on the editor forum ;-) as far as I know, they don't bite. At least I don't have bite marks, yet.
I like the suggestions darkbeast has offered and put together with your fantasy they could become a very nice story to read.
 
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