My December Love

latinlyric

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My December Love...

My December Love (waiting Pablo)

Pablo sits at his desk, the flowing chill of December night air whispers into his ear. He can almost feel her breath on his cheek and thinks of what it would be like if Shantina were here. That's impossible, she is miles away and he will never see her again, for that is the way of the world. All good things must come to a screeching halt at a moment's notice, even if it is involving two twisted souls who long for the others company as the days wear on. Pablo lazily glances over at the empty screen that glares into his eyes each night that he is alone, which is forevermore. A mirror reflects his deep brown eyes back at him which peer into his soul and reveal truths, piercing through iceblocks with passionless heat of angst. Thinking of what he should do, write a poem to noone in particular, or possibly sit and wait for some great spectacle to happen?, *thinks* "Yeah, sure like that will ever occur." He grazes the mouse, which activates the now stirring computer screen, emitting rays of light which illuminate the darkeness surrounding his half-naked body. Cloth is nothing but a giftwrap to the hidden gems underneath a person's personality, which are swiftly hurled at the nearest floor in the throes of passion. Pablo is different, he lets nothing be discarded and grasps onto the folds of a womans mind like newborn an infant which clutches his mothers breast. His long slender fingers skitter across the keyboard as thieves do in the night, stealing glances through the glow, onto the awaiting field which patterns of love run lovingly across. Pablo has begun typing a plea for welcome and invites others to join him in the quest for friendship. In the back of his mind races thoughts of Shantina and he hopes that by some miracle she should come across it and reply......
 
My December Love..continued

My December Love (waiting Shantina)

Far away in another land, Shantina woefully readies to climb into her awaiting bedsheets, which wrap around her with the warmth of a thousand suns. Gentle emeralds peer out into the coal-black night, searching for something or someone of comfort and happiness which the soul doth long for. Careening thoughts are a whirlwind of delight in Shantina's mind which overflow onto her quivering luscious lips of lust and passion. Mere words cannot fully express what these enigmatic caresses of wonder do to a person who loves. A plethora of literature books would be forever filled with her thoughts which are scrawled onto the inner walls of her compassionate heart. She longs to speak with her loving Pablo, and speak to him of her wanting desires. Swiflty plucking herself out of bed, her body swift as gazelles, floats to an awaiting keyboard. Wonderful scenes of characters flooded the screen, as she glanced on her forum of choice. Reviewing posts filled with verbal pillars of emotion and feeling which tendrils grasp at the soul. Her eyes glance to search for his name on the glowing screen and now sees the recent post which has graced her presence anew. Flowing raven hair slithers across her lovely princess-like face and clings to her being with wonderful fervor and glancing fingers of love. Words like faucets cascade onto the floor, an overflowing consortion of emotion which melts the inner mind. Light milky skin which dissolves within the tastebuds of the tongue, as fire flickers within her vivacious breast which now spills out of her nightgown kissing the air with erect nipples. Pursing her lips together, pouting, fully extended, wishing to grip his magical stories and keep them close. Shantina's love for Pablo grows as she reads his thread, wanting to be held in his arms and stroke his latin eyes with butterfly wings of awaiting liquid desire.....
 
** LATIN BUMP**

IM BUMPIN' THIS THREAD, SO THAT YOU CAN SEE IT BETTER!..LOL thanks everyone for letting me go unnoticed, I appreciate it immensely. peace and respect.
 
Re: ** LATIN BUMP**

latinlyric said:
IM BUMPIN' THIS THREAD, SO THAT YOU CAN SEE IT BETTER!..LOL thanks everyone for letting me go unnoticed, I appreciate it immensely. peace and respect.
In case this helps: HAVE YOU NOTICED ANYONE ELSE HERE BEFORE YOU DEMANDED TO BE NOTICED?
 
**SORRY..:)**

Im asking for feedback and someone to read my posts and reply to them. I am being slept on a lot these days, probably because I am so nice. Get to know me, before you pass any judgments. thanks
 
I read them both, and I thought they were very densely written and kind of over-the-top. They were hard to read. From what I could make out, the first is about a guy sitting at a computer missing a girl, and the second is about the girl doing the same thing. That's a lot of text for two people missing each other.

Just my opinion.

---dr.M.
 
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