My Debut - Would Love Feedback

AmethystRains

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Good morning Lits.. My first submission has finally been approved and as a new writer, I would absolutely love any feedback.

It's the first in a 6-chapter series about a girl and a guy who meet online, and is loosely based on the story of how I met my husband. I hope you like it, and thank you in advance for any feedback. :kiss:

http://www.literotica.com/s/they-met-online-ch-01
 
I just wanted to thank those who submitted some feedback so far. I am hard at work on chapter 2 :)
 
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