my cousin and my wife.

mattly said:
Hope this is the proper place to ask if someone could write a story for me as I am not that creatively inclined.
About 20 years ago my wife, myself and my male cousin were quite close do to a common interest. Several times I caught them flirting with one another. They just laughed it off. I was never certain if things progressed beyond the flirting or not. He got involved in other things and kinda went his own way.
About 2 months ago my wife told me she ran into Don at a Wal-mart and spent some time in his van catching up on old times. She said nothing sexual happened. hmm. Now I find myself fantasizing about them having sex together, not only with there recent re-union but the possibility of them doing it 20 years ago.
Could any of you folks write a story for me? It could be written from his view or her view. I would like her to read it and see if she gets as turned on as I do.

Thanks a whole bunch, Mattly
If you want someone to actually write it for you, this isn't the forum to ask (unless someone else offers first), but we will give you ideas of what to write.

Although just about every idea on Lit has its bases in books, movies, or TV shows, I don't believe this one has been on Lit before.
Let's say you have a time machine, and you can go back in the past and watch your current friends and family have sex for the first time.

This brings up the typical "Back To The Future" scenario with a twist.
Instead of the possibility your father never married your mother, your father may not have had sex with your mother in such a way you could be conceived.
Maybe the time machine also has a shrink ray, and can channel sperm right to the egg (Via "Fantastic Voyage").

Lastly, the time machine has an invisibility cloak, so you can peek on anyone without them knowing it.
 
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Fantasies_only said:
If you want someone to actually write it for you, this isn't the forum to ask (unless someone else offers first), but we will give you ideas of what to write.

Says who? You?

There's nothing that says his post doesn't belong here, and last time I checked, you weren't a mod.
 
cloudy said:
Says who? You?

There's nothing that says his post doesn't belong here, and last time I checked, you weren't a mod.
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Fantasies_only said:
Story Ideas
Have an idea for a story you'd like to see? Post it here!

Exactly. He doesn't want to write it himself, it's a "story he'd like to see."

dumbass.
 
cloudy said:
Exactly. He doesn't want to write it himself, it's a "story he'd like to see."

dumbass.
Actually you are the dumbass.
Aside from the general idea, he doesn't know where to go with this, and that's fine, but he asked people to write it for him.
 
Fantasies_only said:
Actually you are the dumbass.
Aside from the general idea, he doesn't know where to go with this, and that's fine, but he asked people to write it for him.

BAHAHAHAHA!!!

ohhhh-kay, newb, whatever you say. :rolleyes:
 
Mattly, you did post in the right board. :) It does sound like interesting enough of a tale. Hope someone picks it up for you.
 
Hallowed Eve said:
Mattly, you did post in the right board. :) It does sound like interesting enough of a tale. Hope someone picks it up for you.
You're the one who brought it up.
I don't see you contributing anything to this thread.
 
Fantasies_only said:
You're the one who brought it up.
I don't see you contributing anything to this thread.
I have two questions for you.

1: Brought what up?

2: How do you define "contribution?"
 
FatDino said:
I have two questions for you.

1: Brought what up?

2: How do you define "contribution?"
1: Brought up meaning rehashing the subject of the best forum to put his request.
2: Contribution means helping or adding to the original request such as my time travel idea, not contributing can be anything from flames to spam or just off topic conversation.
 
Fantasies you have done nothing but not contribute since your second post. Besides which, your not a moderator, if you think something should be elsewhere, report it to a moderator and leave it alone. :rolleyes:

Mattly it has lots of merit, though really needs a bit more information out there for people. Namely, what was the common interest? Seriously that makes a huge difference, if it is baseball it leads to different things than gardening or card playing.

Course the meeting up again and sitting in his van is quite easy to write up, you rather handed out the whole scenario right there, unless someone wants to do conversation beyond 'oh hi I have not seen you in forever, let's go to your van and fuck.' ;)
 
emap said:
Fantasies you have done nothing but not contribute since your second post. Besides which, your not a moderator, if you think something should be elsewhere, report it to a moderator and leave it alone. :rolleyes:

Mattly it has lots of merit, though really needs a bit more information out there for people. Namely, what was the common interest? Seriously that makes a huge difference, if it is baseball it leads to different things than gardening or card playing.

Course the meeting up again and sitting in his van is quite easy to write up, you rather handed out the whole scenario right there, unless someone wants to do conversation beyond 'oh hi I have not seen you in forever, let's go to your van and fuck.' ;)
Why do I get chewed out for just answering questions?
There was another person asking them who stayed off topic rather than post a single thing that was on topic, and I don't think one who does contribute something to the thread should be required to do so at every post.

Mattly, I'm sure there's another idea out there (which emap didn't suggest).
Maybe instead of going to the event, the event comes to you, like you are watching TV, and you have cameras spread across time, but these "time cameras" (phased 8 seconds in the future of the subjects so cannot be seen, heard, or felt) must be movable all around the world, so you don't get stuck with "action" happening off frame.
 
Sorry folks, I didn't mean to start a firestorm. Please accept my apologizes.

mattly
 
mattly said:
Sorry folks, I didn't mean to start a firestorm. Please accept my apologizes.

mattly
You have nothing to apologize for, mattly. You did post your idea in the right forum, no matter what anyone says.
 
Fantasies_only said:
1: Brought up meaning rehashing the subject of the best forum to put his request.
I believe Hallowed Eve was not the one who said mattly had posted in the wrong forum, nor the one who avoided the topic of the conversation. The last time I checked, it seemed like you're the one who did both of those things you're criticizing about.

Want proof?

Fantasies_only said:
If you want someone to actually write it for you, this isn't the forum to ask (unless someone else offers first), but we will give you ideas of what to write.

And even in that sentence, you contradicted yourself. If this wasn't the forum to ask someone else to write stories based on your ideas, then how could you give him ideas of what to write?

What do you mean by "unless someone else offers first?" This forum was created for people to post their ideas for stories. If you look at other threads in here, you'll see that they all follow the same pattern: new ideas looking for someone with interest to pick them up.

2: Contribution means helping or adding to the original request such as my time travel idea, not contributing can be anything from flames to spam or just off topic conversation.
Your time travel idea was indeed a contribution, but didn't you see? You're adding your idea to his, and asking someone else to write it. You're doing the same thing he is and yet, you're saying that he had posted this in the wrong place.

If you hadn't brought up the saying that mattly had done wrong, there wouldn't have been corrections coming from cloudy, Hallowed, emap, and me. Therefore, we're not spamming, we're getting involved in a discussion, and that's what a forum is for.

Off topic conversation? Every single post in this thread either says mattly has posted in the right place, and/or his idea is interesting, and/or wishing him luck that someone will pick up and write a story off it. I don't think any of those comments can be considered "off topic."
 
FatDino said:
I believe Hallowed Eve was not the one who said mattly had posted in the wrong forum, nor the one who avoided the topic of the conversation. The last time I checked, it seemed like you're the one who did both of those things you're criticizing about.

Want proof?



And even in that sentence, you contradicted yourself. If this wasn't the forum to ask someone else to write stories based on your ideas, then how could you give him ideas of what to write?

What do you mean by "unless someone else offers first?" This forum was created for people to post their ideas for stories. If you look at other threads in here, you'll see that they all follow the same pattern: new ideas looking for someone with interest to pick them up.


Your time travel idea was indeed a contribution, but didn't you see? You're adding your idea to his, and asking someone else to write it. You're doing the same thing he is and yet, you're saying that he had posted this in the wrong place.

If you hadn't brought up the saying that mattly had done wrong, there wouldn't have been corrections coming from cloudy, Hallowed, emap, and me. Therefore, we're not spamming, we're getting involved in a discussion, and that's what a forum is for.

Off topic conversation? Every single post in this thread either says mattly has posted in the right place, and/or his idea is interesting, and/or wishing him luck that someone will pick up and write a story off it. I don't think any of those comments can be considered "off topic."
You are incorrect on all counts.
First, I never said Hallowed Eve said that this was in the wrong forum.
I said people weren't saying anything else about it.
I was corrected without anyone addressing the subject (except for me).
And even in that sentence, you contradicted yourself. If this wasn't the forum to ask someone else to write stories based on your ideas, then how could you give him ideas of what to write?
What?
I said we could help him brainstorm ideas without writing it for him.
What don't you get?

I have seen others offer assistance into writing a story, but I don't feel asking for such assistance is appropriate in this forum, as I did that when I first came here and was chastised for it.

In addition, a few other posts I would say are ok, if you all hadn't been so bitchy about me.
 
Noooooooooo!

If I agree to write this, can we all move on to something besides arguing about whether Fantasies_Only is an idiot? Which he clearly -- Is, there something in particular you'd like to see in the story, Mattly? Besides the time travel business, which strikes me as -- One of the dumbest ideas I ever heard, turned out to be a pretty good story. Particular names or descriptions? Feel free to PM me, Mattly, so that we can turn out people like -- F_O,_R your information, I have written a few well-regarded stories under another alt, and yours sounds pretty interesting.

Figaro
 
Fantasies_only said:
You are incorrect on all counts.
First, I never said Hallowed Eve said that this was in the wrong forum.
I said people weren't saying anything else about it.
I was corrected without anyone addressing the subject (except for me).

Hallowed Eve said
Hallowed Eve said:
Mattly, you did post in the right board. :) It does sound like interesting enough of a tale. Hope someone picks it up for you.

And you said
Fantasies_only said:
You're the one who brought it up.
I don't see you contributing anything to this thread.
Then I asked you "brought what up?"

You answered
Fantasies_only said:
1: Brought up meaning rehashing the subject of the best forum to put his request.
Read those, and please tell me, who's been bitching around here?

And where did I ever say that you said that Hallowed said that this was the wrong forum?
 
BarbarouSevil said:
If I agree to write this, can we all move on to something besides arguing about whether Fantasies_Only is an idiot? Which he clearly -- Is, there something in particular you'd like to see in the story, Mattly? Besides the time travel business, which strikes me as -- One of the dumbest ideas I ever heard, turned out to be a pretty good story. Particular names or descriptions? Feel free to PM me, Mattly, so that we can turn out people like -- F_O,_R your information, I have written a few well-regarded stories under another alt, and yours sounds pretty interesting.

Figaro

Thanks. Two other writers contacted me by PM and I am sending them more info to help in writing a story for me. I will also send you the info by PM and I do appreciate your kindly response.

Thank you, Mattly
 
mattly said:
Hope this is the proper place to ask if someone could write a story for me as I am not that creatively inclined.
About 20 years ago my wife, myself and my male cousin were quite close do to a common interest. Several times I caught them flirting with one another. They just laughed it off. I was never certain if things progressed beyond the flirting or not. He got involved in other things and kinda went his own way.
About 2 months ago my wife told me she ran into Don at a Wal-mart and spent some time in his van catching up on old times. She said nothing sexual happened. hmm. Now I find myself fantasizing about them having sex together, not only with there recent re-union but the possibility of them doing it 20 years ago.
Could any of you folks write a story for me? It could be written from his view or her view. I would like her to read it and see if she gets as turned on as I do.

Thanks a whole bunch, Mattly
If you want someone to actually write it for you, this isn't the forum to ask (unless someone else offers first), but we will give you ideas of what to write.

Although just about every idea on Lit has its bases in books, movies, or TV shows, I don't believe this one has been on Lit before.
Let's say you have a time machine, and you can go back in the past and watch your current friends and family have sex for the first time.

This brings up the typical "Back To The Future" scenario with a twist.
Instead of the possibility your father never married your mother, your father may not have had sex with your mother in such a way you could be conceived.
Maybe the time machine also has a shrink ray, and can channel sperm right to the egg (Via "Fantastic Voyage").

Lastly, the time machine has an invisibility cloak, so you can peek on anyone without them knowing it.
cloudy said:
Says who? You?

There's nothing that says his post doesn't belong here, and last time I checked, you weren't a mod.
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cloudy said:
Exactly. He doesn't want to write it himself, it's a "story he'd like to see."

dumbass.
Actually you are the dumbass.
Aside from the general idea, he doesn't know where to go with this, and that's fine, but he asked people to write it for him.
cloudy said:
BAHAHAHAHA!!!

ohhhh-kay, newb, whatever you say. :rolleyes:
Hallowed Eve said:
Mattly, you did post in the right board. :) It does sound like interesting enough of a tale. Hope someone picks it up for you.
You're the one who brought it up.
I don't see you contributing anything to this thread.
This was my fault, but not how you think.
I just quoted the wrong person.
I meant it to go under this:
cloudy said:
BAHAHAHAHA!!!

ohhhh-kay, newb, whatever you say. :rolleyes:
Nobody has to gang up on me, call me names, and give me insults.

Mattly, please ask the mods to lock this thread as it's getting out of control and has nothing to do with the topic at hand.
I believe you got your idea as well, so there is no reason for this to stay open.
 
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mattly said:
Sorry folks, I didn't mean to start a firestorm. Please accept my apologizes.

mattly

You've done nothing wrong. You posted your story idea/request. That's what this board is about! :) I'm glad people contacted you in PMs about this story.

Ignore the troll and welcome to Story Ideas! :D
 
Hallowed Eve said:
You've done nothing wrong. You posted your story idea/request. That's what this board is about! :) I'm glad people contacted you in PMs about this story.

Ignore the troll and welcome to Story Ideas! :D
I'm not a troll.
What did I just say?
I quoted the wrong person that's all.

Wouldn't it make more sense if I had responded that way to the post I said I meant?
As for your next post, I mentioned "rehashing the subject" which of course you didn't do, so why didn't you pick up on that?
I obviously meant it for someone else because I would never talk to a person like that without provocation, let alone respond to one who didn't say anything to me.

If you didn't get it, I also appologized for butting in on the orgy thread.
 
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