My boyfriend watches helplessly while I get gangraped right in front of him

[SashaGaga999]

hey guys. i came on here originally just to post a few pics of me to accompany a friend's story that he wantedto write about me. never really used message boards before, and i didnt think i'd say for long...but its been a fun experience, and reading the reactions to my friend's story idea got me thinking of my own ideas...

i dunno if you aren't supposed to use yourself in your stories, but i read some of what my friend wrote that was about me, and i like the idea of being the subject of people's lusty thoughts.

so i had an idea for a story:

me and my boyfriend are out in the middle of the night walking home from the store, and we take a shortcut down an alley.

we get surprised by a group of 7 guys with guns, some of them have shotguns, others have pistols....anyway we're clearly in trouble, so we just freeze.

and like maybe my boyfriend assures me "its okay sasha, just do what they say..."

and i forgot...before we left our house, since its so late at night and we thought we werent gonna see anybody except the store clerk, my bf had me dress really sexy, like maybe in tight shiny black pants and one of those tops that is SUUUPER low cut, like down to my belly button, with really loose fabric so my tits are almost totally exposed...

then the gang guys tell us both to get on our knees, and put our hands behind our head...so i have my boobs all pushed out, and no bra...and they look at me and decide to gangbang me...like they start by making me suck their dicks one by one, then they start fucking me one after another, and while im getting fucked another of them is fucking my mouth...

all with my boyfriend 2-3 feet away. he really wants to try and save me, but one of the gang guys holds a gun right to his head, so he just sits there listening to me take it from all of them in succession...i really like the idea of him being helpless to do ANYTHING, and watching 7 strangers fuck me and being RIGHT next to me.

i'm also thinking that i would fight back against the guys at first, but eventually have no choice but to succumb to the fucking and start moaning with pleasure...again all with the bf listening/watching right in front of him.

is that too weird that i'm making myself the main character?

 

[DefiantOne]

mmmm...hopefully you (the central character) gets pregnant as a result and the gang forces your bf to eat you out / clean you up after they're done.

 

[JustaSCOUNDREL]

Not weird at all. There are lots of stories here where the author, both male and female, is the main protagonist. They, the author, are ether doing to or being done onto. They play out their own fantasies in the stories.

I say go for it and have a good time.

Mike

 

[jeninflorida]

I'm not sure how many people would want to read this story. some times we want erotica to escape reality.

now, on the flip side this can be very hot! did you get a chance to watch the movie "The Bad Lieutenant: Port of Call - New Orleans" there is a killer part in the story where he busts this young couple for drugs and makes the guy watch as he does the wife/gf

what would a man feel, being in that situation as his wife has to endure that?

from her point of view, being a bad girl and that she has to do things can be a release as she has no control over the situation.

hey guys. i came on here originally just to post a few pics of me to accompany a friend's story that he wantedto write about me. never really used message boards before, and i didnt think i'd say for long...but its been a fun experience, and reading the reactions to my friend's story idea got me thinking of my own ideas...

i dunno if you aren't supposed to use yourself in your stories, but i read some of what my friend wrote that was about me, and i like the idea of being the subject of people's lusty thoughts.

so i had an idea for a story:

me and my boyfriend are out in the middle of the night walking home from the store, and we take a shortcut down an alley.

we get surprised by a group of 7 guys with guns, some of them have shotguns, others have pistols....anyway we're clearly in trouble, so we just freeze.

and like maybe my boyfriend assures me "its okay sasha, just do what they say..."

and i forgot...before we left our house, since its so late at night and we thought we werent gonna see anybody except the store clerk, my bf had me dress really sexy, like maybe in tight shiny black pants and one of those tops that is SUUUPER low cut, like down to my belly button, with really loose fabric so my tits are almost totally exposed...

then the gang guys tell us both to get on our knees, and put our hands behind our head...so i have my boobs all pushed out, and no bra...and they look at me and decide to gangbang me...like they start by making me suck their dicks one by one, then they start fucking me one after another, and while im getting fucked another of them is fucking my mouth...

all with my boyfriend 2-3 feet away. he really wants to try and save me, but one of the gang guys holds a gun right to his head, so he just sits there listening to me take it from all of them in succession...i really like the idea of him being helpless to do ANYTHING, and watching 7 strangers fuck me and being RIGHT next to me.

i'm also thinking that i would fight back against the guys at first, but eventually have no choice but to succumb to the fucking and start moaning with pleasure...again all with the bf listening/watching right in front of him.

is that too weird that i'm making myself the main character?

 

[DocCIS]

I'm not sure how many people would want to read this story. some times we want erotica to escape reality.

The twist could be maybe she enjoys showing herself off...and has always had a gang bang fantasy. The boyfriend has had the similar fantasy of watching her getting ganged...but neither of them confided into the other about their fantasies.

That would make the emotional roller coaster ride interesting, as she obviously does not want to give into a group of strangers, but it HAS been a fantasy, so starts to enjoy it. The boyfriend on the other hand is outraged at the mugging and abuse of his girlfriend...but it HAS been a fantasy, so starts to enjoy it...

If it were all about abuse, I agree, it wouldn't garnish an audience...but if it was spun in more of a reluctant/non-consensual turns to enjoyment story, it would be pretty good IMO...

Another twist could be one or both have confided into their friends about their fantasies and it is actually the friends who are the "muggers" since both are afraid of what the other would think if they shared their fantasies...and this becomes a testing ground where they can say they were "forced" if the other doesn't get turned on...just another thought...

 

[Wyatt]

As a writer of this kind of story myself I think it is a fantasy for many women. I don't usually use a gun in my scenarios. Personally I prefer the blackmail angle. However, nearly all of my feedback is from ladies who have told me that this is a taboo fantasy for them and they often feel the total loss of control over the situation seemed to be their main interest in the idea. Some also wished their husband/boyfriend/partner witnessed the rape but was powerless.

I say go for it.

 

[SashaGaga999]

As a writer of this kind of story myself I think it is a fantasy for many women. I don't usually use a gun in my scenarios. Personally I prefer the blackmail angle. However, nearly all of my feedback is from ladies who have told me that this is a taboo fantasy for them and they often feel the total loss of control over the situation seemed to be their main interest in the idea. Some also wished their husband/boyfriend/partner witnessed the rape but was powerless.

I say go for it.

That's what I'M saying...i didn't know the gun would be such a big deal for people....i just liked the idea of being completely overpowered and fucked by a bunch of guys, with my boyfriend there, in close proximity, wanting to help but being totally unable to...

loll lit is so funny.......

 

[nnnewboytoy]

the gun isnt a big deal. its just a fantasy, as hardcore as it is. i havent been on lit in ages. good to be back.

 

[nakdsub]

Will it be the same old stuff?

There are a ton of stories describing this kind of scenario. I'd like to see someone write this story truthfully. Usually, the very thing thing that happens is that the boyfriends dick gets hard, then the girlfriend realizes, (much to her horror) that she is wet and her body, "betrays" her. All this with in the first few seconds of course.

Can you even imagine the trauma during an event like this. First, are you going to live through it?
For the boy friend, yes we all know he is powerless, but if he is a man, he will somewhere, in his heart, believe he should have done some something. That guilt will eventually drive him from her.

As much as she would fight against it, she would have similar thoughts. There are many, many, many cases where a wife was raped and, even though the husband was loving and nurturing, the wife could not live with the guilt and subconsciously would push him away.

I know this is supposed to be a fantasy but is there away way you can write with, at least, a little more originality than, "he was on his knees with a gun pointed at his head and he was horrified when he felt his dick twitch in his pants."

 

[Sean Renaud]

People write that story over and over because it's what people want to read. Your scenario quite frankly doesn't seem to have much of an audience. You can add a dash of realism but honestly almost have to counter act it with something even hokier to keep the balance.

 

[nakdsub]

Unfortunately, everything you say is true

I hear the average sit-com, today, is written for a 5th. grade mentality, so instead of the intelligent, well written comedy of the 50's and 60's, we're subjected to sophomoric bathroom humor instead.

I know I sound very judgmental here and I don't mean to do that. I read this site because, out of all the erotic story sites out there, this is, by far, the best. It's just that I long for stories that stir my emotions as well as appeal to my kinks.

I have started reading so many stories I thought were going to be great only to see them sink into the same old, disappointing, abyss.

Once in a while, even a blind squirrel finds a nut now and then, and I will find a wonderful story that makes it all worth while.

 

[silverwhisper]

nakdsub quoth:
i hear the average sit-com, today, is written for a 5th. grade mentality, so instead of the intelligent, well written comedy of the 50s and 60s, we're subjected to sophomoric bathroom humor instead.

i'd like to hear a source for that as it sounds like someone else's made-up-on-the-spot "fact"--the giveaway would be "5th grade mentality", rather than "reading level".

and there's been plenty of witty writing on TV. you just need to avoid the pointless reality show crap.

ed

 

[nakdsub]

No, that is actually a fact

I have heard and read several times that the sit-com writers of today use a 5th grade, mentality, (not reading level) as a format.

Case in point; From 2 1/2 men, (housekeeper) when I eat beans I toot, (ditsy blond) Jee, when I eat beans I just fart.

Of course that is followed by uproarious caned laughter.

I don't watch the program, but I did see that for some reason. Maybe it was on a commercial.

I watch very little TV and would never waste my time watching a reality show or sit-com these days.

Of course this is all off point.

 

[Texguy84]

I have heard and read several times that the sit-com writers of today use a 5th grade, mentality, (not reading level) as a format.

Case in point; From 2 1/2 men, (housekeeper) when I eat beans I toot, (ditsy blond) Jee, when I eat beans I just fart.

Of course that is followed by uproarious caned laughter.

I don't watch the program, but I did see that for some reason. Maybe it was on a commercial.

I watch very little TV and would never waste my time watching a reality show or sit-com these days.

Of course this is all off point.

"Anecdote" is not a synonym for "Data". Where did you get this "fact" from?

And yes, there is intelligent TV out there, sometimes you just have to poke around a bit to find it.

 

[jeninflorida]

People write that story over and over because it's what people want to read. Your scenario quite frankly doesn't seem to have much of an audience. You can add a dash of realism but honestly almost have to counter act it with something even hokier to keep the balance.

spot on.

I hear the average sit-com, today, is written for a 5th. grade mentality, so instead of the intelligent, well written comedy of the 50's and 60's, we're subjected to sophomoric bathroom humor instead.

I know I sound very judgmental here and I don't mean to do that. I read this site because, out of all the erotic story sites out there, this is, by far, the best. It's just that I long for stories that stir my emotions as well as appeal to my kinks.

I have started reading so many stories I thought were going to be great only to see them sink into the same old, disappointing, abyss.

Once in a while, even a blind squirrel finds a nut now and then, and I will find a wonderful story that makes it all worth while.

most people want to tune the world out or off. So, they keep it simple.

not every show is written for 5th graders though

 

[Sean Renaud]

I hear the average sit-com, today, is written for a 5th. grade mentality, so instead of the intelligent, well written comedy of the 50's and 60's, we're subjected to sophomoric bathroom humor instead..

I hear that everything is written at that level not just sitcoms but books and newspapers. I'd love for someone to define what that means exactly. My reading skills haven't significantly improved since the third grade. My vocabulary has expanded so I don't need to look up what a daiquiri is but I've been able to read since I was pretty young.

We certainly didn't get well written comedy in the 50's and 60's. There isn't even a debate as to if modern writing is more sophisticated than that shlock.

 

[silverwhisper]

nakdsub quoth:
i have heard and read several times that the sit-com writers of today use a 5th grade, mentality, (not reading level) as a format.

where, and by whom precisely?

nakdsub quoth:
i watch very little TV and would never waste my time watching a reality show or sit-com these days.

so precisely how in the fuck would you possibly know one way or the other, pray tell?

ed

 

[gregy70]

is that too weird that i'm making myself the main character?


Not at all, would be quite hot

 

[SexyMel2812]

This is a fantasy of mine too. Tho the reality would probbaly be horrific, the fantasy is so hot. Maybe the girl gets to like it and they take them hostage and keep using her in different ways over a period of time. Even make some money out of whoring her out.

 

[Tmmldr]

Suppose several of the gang members are to the girl, really gross and offensive. The leader is a strong, handsome, sexy type. When they start in on the girl (no gun is needed, there is fuckin' 7 of the guys) the leader stands back with a sly smile on his face. The girl is grossed out by the guys pawing her, and as they start in on the sex, she's horrified. Each of the guys is described so that the reader can identify with the girls feelings. Grossly obese, stinks, bad teeth, scars, tatoos...everything that's repulsive to her is embodied in the punks who are violating her.

To escape the horror, she starts imagining it's the gang leader doing her. Then she cums really hard and screams uncontrollably. The gang sees this and think their ugly pricks are what she got off on. The leader comes over and quickly puts his hand over her mouth. The fucking continues nonstop, but he's close to her, she can smell him, and feel him, and she's looking into his eyes. The orgasms continue, and become more and more intense.

She's not even aware that he free hand has crept down to her pussy and she's frigging herself nonstop, imagining he's doing her while she's powerless to resist, he's doing her all three ways, ways she never dreamed of with hubby. Imagining he's ordering her to fuck his gang, so that she can suck his dick, and then she realizes it's happening.

And the husband, held by two of the gang, watches it all...

 

[lovingfingers]

So, do you have someone to write this with you yet? Sounds like fun.

 

[sassysasha89]

I hope there's someone there to write this.

So she gets pregnant but she decides to keep it in the end. To her surprise, she couldn't stop fucking herself with a dildo similar to the leader's cock. She dreamt about getting fucked by them again and it comes true when they did a break-in at her house when her husband was gone or not. This time she was gangbanged in her own bed that time. Whether she's still pregnant or already given birth is up to the person.

 

[kodos9000]

hmmmmm... Sorry but this is a subject that makes me a little uneasy! I love rough sex between consenting adults but I have a real problem with Rape...
I don't now nor have I ever found it sexy in any way! Just food for thought!

 

[sassysasha89]

hmmmmm... Sorry but this is a subject that makes me a little uneasy! I love rough sex between consenting adults but I have a real problem with Rape...
I don't now nor have I ever found it sexy in any way! Just food for thought!

Sorry for the miscommunication - I didn't mean for it to sound like rape here. She craves for that rough sex she had and it gets her wish when they break into her house and gang-bang her over and over.

 

[kodos9000]

Sorry for the miscommunication - I didn't mean for it to sound like rape here. She craves for that rough sex she had and it gets her wish when they break into her house and gang-bang her over and over.

Ok I see!