My Best Effort? You decide

[kinkynkazoo]

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=147380

this is the story that has garnered the highest "rating" so far
Always interested in the opinions of others.

 

[Guest]

SEVEN pages?!

Seven bloody pages?!

I'm putting you on my ignore list.

 

[yui]

SEVEN pages?!

Seven bloody pages?!

I'm putting you on my ignore list.

ChilledVodka,

You might be right…you really might be brilliant. That is the funniest thing I have read in days.

Still laughing…

Yui ^_^

 

[kinkynkazoo]

7 bloody pages? -reply

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Seven Nights in the Caribbean Ch. 01
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You have out done it this time
06/14/04 by Anonymous in USA
OK Kaz you did it again, baby this one really inspired me, reminded me alot of myself!! Like always you keep me waitin for more!! BUT you know there is one that truly gets me goin <wink> ya know the weekend in Paris?

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Kaz You Are My Orgasm Inspiration
06/13/04 by littleepiphany in Canada
I have always enjoyed your work babe but this one was well worth the wait. Can't wait for the next installment.
~sunkissedJeLyn~

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Excellent story!!!
06/12/04 by Anonymous in USA
Wow...made me cum twice while reading this...reminded me of some of the cruises I have taken.

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Very good story!
06/10/04 by Anonymous in USA
The author has a knack for bringing the characters to life, and a great way of building up the erotic tension. I'm looking foreward to the hinted continuance!

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Seven Nights in the Caribbean Ch. 01
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[Guest]

ChilledVodka,

You might be right…you really might be brilliant. That is the funniest thing I have read in days.

Still laughing…

Yui ^_^

Yea, I know. I can't pull that multipel-orgasms trick women sometimes do.

 

[kinkynkazoo]

multiple orgasms-reply

I'm fortunate enough to be "involved" with someone who is like that... she's the basis for all sex scenes

 

[Guest]

Naked pictures, please.

 

[kinkynkazoo]

naked pictures?

What do I get in return? Or better yet... send to kinkynkazoo@yahoo.com...

you'll get back similar to what you send...