My Alter Ego needs help

[lilys_alterego]

Hello Editors,

This is my first post so I apologise in advance for the mistakes I will no doubt make!

I've posted 2 stories to Literotica so far, with relatively good feedback. However, I've never used an Editor and I really think I need one! When I re-read my first story I cringe at the more obvious mistakes I made (especially with mixing my past/present tense).

I've posted to Erotic Couplings and Non-consent. I enjoy reading from both those categories as well as Incest and Non-human.

The current story I have is a sequel to the 'Till Next Time' (http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=356755), and will be posted in Erotic Couplings. It stands at 6 pages (under 3000 words).

My other story, under Non-Consent, is here: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=357849

I think my spelling tends to be ok - I need a critical eye to check I am using the right tense, and that my sentences aren't too long etc. And most importantly that my third story is readable and enjoyable!

If you think you can help and you have some time I'd be very grateful. Please PM me here (I have enabled the function, but never used it before), or directly through yahoo (using the same ID).

Much appreciated,
Lily

 

[ravar]

Willing to help

I am willing to take a look, however I did not major in english lit in college, the best I can do for you is offer a second set of eyes.

 

[lilys_alterego]

Thanks Ravar, and thanks to those who PMed. I think I've have found my editor!

Hopefully I'll have a new story to post soon.

Many thanks,
Lily