my adopted stories that NEED your help

[lilguy]

please help these poor sickly adopted stories


Aunt Paradise
Who doesnt love incest? Oh what a lot of you. Hmmmm that question backfired. But add for fun anyway if you can


Buffy the vampire fucker
She fucks vampire, writes itself

christina sex adventure
the orginal writer was pretty good


fantasy come true
man get his wish to be dominated


grandmother, what big teeth you have
Buffy story with Darla and drusila

Jessica dream life
Jessinca Rabbit story


slayer speacial

WILD ON SPRINGFILED
Fun simpsons story

thrill Bill

Very fun kill Bill story


a world beyond
Discover new worlds

 

[Dr. Tentakelliebe]

Some Hypocritical advice
Aunt Paradise
Ok this one could use some fleshing out on the first and last pages plus some more open ended section so the story can take some other perhaps slower story turns.


Buffy the vampire fucker
"writes itself" probably the problem

christina sex adventure
Sex is too soon, and relies on knowledge of the characters so the audience gets limited. Who is this Ron guy, anyway?


fantasy come true
Sure it is good for the genre, but I prefer dominate men.


grandmother, what big teeth you have
Kinky considering it if I can get the time

Jessica dream life
has some encoding errors that really need to be fixed, and some the treads desperately need fleshing out.


slayer speacial I am noticing a theme here, anyway if i get the time I might actually add to this one, if I don't do what big teeth

WILD ON SPRINGFILED
Maybe there just aren't that many simpson fans

thrill Bill

Good story, at least the O-ren threads I read but you need to tidy up the paragraphing space so it can be read more easily


a world beyond
Really need expansion

This has been your daily dose of hypocrisy

 

[Dr. Tentakelliebe]

Personally probably going go with Noir City when I get the chance

 

[lilguy]

Personally probably going go with Noir City when I get the chance

that would be a good thing to do

I hear the writer is great

 

[Dr. Tentakelliebe]

wait you haven't read it and you adopted it?

 

[Imhotep]

I think he's joking.

 

[lilguy]

yea it actully written by me

not adopted

 

[Kulit]

I will take

I will adopt the story 'Thrill Bill' i have somewhat of a fetish for Orientals.