my 2nd idea lol
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I think the problem with an idea like this is that its too typical - too normal.
But, if you already have all the juicy details, why not write it yourself?
But, if you already have all the juicy details, why not write it yourself?
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Gourry said:
most men cant spell foreplay let alone perform .... lol
the hard part about erotica for men, short attention spans. most men want a story around 3,000 words. personally, i would prefer a story where the couples build relationships and become very comfortable...then have sex.
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jeninflorida said:
I'm not a man, but I'm insulted by your generalizations about a sex.
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bisexplicit said:
Didn't mean for it to be insulting...just some of the feedback that I've gotten from readers and magazines that I've sold stories to. Was having a great day yesterday and a little .... i guess pumped up. was a little sarcastic and ment to be a playfull dig.....
i'm sorry
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Texguy84 said:We can too! It's spelled T-A-K-E P-A-N-T-S O-F-F.
lol too funny
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Gourry said:
I think the hard rock in vegas has stripper bar's in the hotel room....that could be a fun weekend.....keep the drapes open so that anyone can peek in...a little strip tease, and dance around the pole. never done that, but its a great fantasy
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well that was a general idea I have loads more detail if soemone is interested thats all. i mean i could turn this story idea into an erotic couple to exhibition, or incest, or mature you know. just whatever teh author is good at. As for me last time i wrote a story was high school lol.
well that was a general idea I have loads more detail if soemone is interested thats all. i mean i could turn this story idea into an erotic couple to exhibition, or incest, or mature you know. just whatever teh author is good at. As for me last time i wrote a story was high school lol.
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jeninflorida said:
No need to apologize - I was in a pissy mood yesterday.
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Texguy84 said:We can too! It's spelled T-A-K-E P-A-N-T-S O-F-F.
*giggles*
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Gourry said:well that was a general idea I have loads more detail if soemone is interested thats all. i mean i could turn this story idea into an erotic couple to exhibition, or incest, or mature you know. just whatever teh author is good at. As for me last time i wrote a story was high school lol.
Well, why don't you share your details with the class here?
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Lets go with this idea.
A husband and wife newly married finds out the sex life is not how it was before they got married, so the husband while at work or out in the mall gets some ideas, and descides to maybe buy somethings for his wife such as oils and so on and maybe a thong or some sexy boxers for him to wear for her as well as some wine or soemthing like that. And while he is doing this his wife is at anothe rpalce and descides also to try to spice things up by buying some lingerie as well as some edible stuff. THings get planned by both without each otther knowing and then lets say the husband starts things off by teasing his wife with the thong of boxers and so on. so the wife then gets into the idea and has him sit down and does a nice lingere strip tease for him before both going on a nice good sex romp lol. I would love to see these positions. Her riding him, Him takening her while she is on all fours. her agaist teh wall as he enters her from behind. or her agaist teh wall facing him while she is lifted up and her arms wrapped around his body as well as her legs and they fuck. then maybe some oral action in the shower and more fucking lol. at the end they find whats missing in the marriage and start form then on to do stuff like this, the strip teaes from both and some toys as well lol. Oh and I love royal blue so i'd love for him to fuck her while she has some blue stockings on lol.
i know i'm odd huh rofl.
Lets go with this idea.
A husband and wife newly married finds out the sex life is not how it was before they got married, so the husband while at work or out in the mall gets some ideas, and descides to maybe buy somethings for his wife such as oils and so on and maybe a thong or some sexy boxers for him to wear for her as well as some wine or soemthing like that. And while he is doing this his wife is at anothe rpalce and descides also to try to spice things up by buying some lingerie as well as some edible stuff. THings get planned by both without each otther knowing and then lets say the husband starts things off by teasing his wife with the thong of boxers and so on. so the wife then gets into the idea and has him sit down and does a nice lingere strip tease for him before both going on a nice good sex romp lol. I would love to see these positions. Her riding him, Him takening her while she is on all fours. her agaist teh wall as he enters her from behind. or her agaist teh wall facing him while she is lifted up and her arms wrapped around his body as well as her legs and they fuck. then maybe some oral action in the shower and more fucking lol. at the end they find whats missing in the marriage and start form then on to do stuff like this, the strip teaes from both and some toys as well lol. Oh and I love royal blue so i'd love for him to fuck her while she has some blue stockings on lol.
i know i'm odd huh rofl.
