My 1st. non-human story.

[JustinLee]

I have a list of firsts:

This is the first story on Literotica.
This is the first non-human story I've written
This is my first story with sex in it.

I have posted on WeBook and Scribophile.

I would appreciate any help I can get.

 

[Hypoxia]

I have a list of firsts:

This is the first story on Literotica.
This is the first non-human story I've written
This is my first story with sex in it.

I have posted on WeBook and Scribophile.

I would appreciate any help I can get.

How long is the story -- how many words? What kind of help are you asking for? Do you want technical editing, or editorial revision, or what? And you should enable private messaging (PMs) in your profile. Good luck.