AG31
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Yesterday a number of you helped me turn this sentence
into this sentence.
This morning I woke up to noodle over this one. Slashes indicate choices between words and phrases. Square brackets indicate doubt about whether to include at all or not.
I'm very interested in the wide variety of what you authors would do with this sentence, but be aware ahead of time that you won't win a prize if you include any of these words: panties, hole, pussy. They set my teeth on edge.
I'm comfortable with clitoris, vagina and anus, but would be happy to find alternatives.
TIA,
AG
Edit: P.S. @FrancesScott introduced (perhaps inadvertently) a variable that I hadn't addressed. I'm imagining a very close 3rd person narrative. She seems to be imagining a more distanced 3rd person narrative.
Her whole body was was suffused with warmth. It focussed/was concentrated deliciously(??) on/gathered deliciously in her breasts/nipples and vagina/between her legs.
into this sentence.
Heat blossomed throughout her body, gathering with delicious intensity in her breasts and sex.
This morning I woke up to noodle over this one. Slashes indicate choices between words and phrases. Square brackets indicate doubt about whether to include at all or not.
Her vagina and anus pulsed. Her clitoris swelled against [the] smoothe silk [of her ___??___]
I'm very interested in the wide variety of what you authors would do with this sentence, but be aware ahead of time that you won't win a prize if you include any of these words: panties, hole, pussy. They set my teeth on edge.
I'm comfortable with clitoris, vagina and anus, but would be happy to find alternatives.
TIA,
AG
Edit: P.S. @FrancesScott introduced (perhaps inadvertently) a variable that I hadn't addressed. I'm imagining a very close 3rd person narrative. She seems to be imagining a more distanced 3rd person narrative.
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