Mother, a birthday party, and a stripper

[NASCARaddicted]

What about this one:

Carl lives together with his Mom, there is no Dad. He is almost 21, his Mom is around 40. When she was younger, she started working as a stripper in a strip club, and she still does it today. She is very open about that, so everybody, including her son knows about her profession.

One day, Carl talks to his mother
"Hey Mom, next week is my birthday. I thought about having a birthday party with my buddies."
"Oh, what a great idea. We can hire a clown and maybe do something like pony riding and stuff like that."
"Mom, I turn 21, not 8. I thought about something more adult - like for example get a keg of beer."
"Ah, now I get it. Some beer, some loud music and a stripper."
"A stripper? I haven't thought about that, but it sure would be cool. My buddies would freak out if I have a stripper on my party. Do you think you can ask one of your coworkers from the strip club?"
"Sure. I know one or two of them still owes me a favour. Just imagine how your buddies will envy you, if she gives you a lap dance."

Mom talks to her coworkers and one of them, Sally is ready to do it.

A few days later, it's Carls birthday. Suddenly the phone rings - it is Sally. She is ill with the flew and so she can't strip at the party.
"Damn. And now the time is too short to find another stripper. All the other girls will work tonight at the club."
"Oh no. And I already told all the boys I will have something special on the party. But now, without a stripper, there will be nothing special."
"Hey Carl, what about this: I can do a striptease on your party."
"What? No way. All the other guys would make fun of me and laugh about me."
"Why should they laugh? You know, last week at the strip club, we had a special event: 40+. All the strippers have been over 40. That night, I earned $100 in just 10 minutes. And most of the guys that gave me money have been around 18 to 21. So why should your buddies make fun of you? Do you think their mothers have a good looking, natural body, like I do?. They will envy you. And if you receive your birthday lap dance, I guess they will freak out. Lapdance is one of my specialties."
"O.k. let's give it a try."

So the paty get's started and when Mom gets on stage and starts to strip, everyone turns quiet and looks at her in awe ...

 

[actorsub]

do the friends know that she is his mom?

What about this one:

Carl lives together with his Mom, there is no Dad. He is almost 21, his Mom is around 40. When she was younger, she started working as a stripper in a strip club, and she still does it today. She is very open about that, so everybody, including her son knows about her profession.

One day, Carl talks to his mother
"Hey Mom, next week is my birthday. I thought about having a birthday party with my buddies."
"Oh, what a great idea. We can hire a clown and maybe do something like pony riding and stuff like that."
"Mom, I turn 21, not 8. I thought about something more adult - like for example get a keg of beer."
"Ah, now I get it. Some beer, some loud music and a stripper."
"A stripper? I haven't thought about that, but it sure would be cool. My buddies would freak out if I have a stripper on my party. Do you think you can ask one of your coworkers from the strip club?"
"Sure. I know one or two of them still owes me a favour. Just imagine how your buddies will envy you, if she gives you a lap dance."

Mom talks to her coworkers and one of them, Sally is ready to do it.

A few days later, it's Carls birthday. Suddenly the phone rings - it is Sally. She is ill with the flew and so she can't strip at the party.
"Damn. And now the time is too short to find another stripper. All the other girls will work tonight at the club."
"Oh no. And I already told all the boys I will have something special on the party. But now, without a stripper, there will be nothing special."
"Hey Carl, what about this: I can do a striptease on your party."
"What? No way. All the other guys would make fun of me and laugh about me."
"Why should they laugh? You know, last week at the strip club, we had a special event: 40+. All the strippers have been over 40. That night, I earned $100 in just 10 minutes. And most of the guys that gave me money have been around 18 to 21. So why should your buddies make fun of you? Do you think their mothers have a good looking, natural body, like I do?. They will envy you. And if you receive your birthday lap dance, I guess they will freak out. Lapdance is one of my specialties."
"O.k. let's give it a try."

So the paty get's started and when Mom gets on stage and starts to strip, everyone turns quiet and looks at her in awe ...

 

[NASCARaddicted]

do the friends know that she is his mom?

Oh, I thought I made that clear in my first post.

Yes, they know that it is his Mom. That is why Carl fears that the other guys would make fun of him.

But then, on the party, everyone likes her and makes her compliments. One guy even says "If my Mom would look like this, I would fuck her" (but that doesn't mean that this story has to include incest)

However, it would also be an interesting twist, if the other guys don't know that she is his Mom. That way, the other guys could tell the birthday guy to flirt with her. Or some of the other guys could also start to flirt with her.

And just think: one of the guys even offers her money for sex, while the other people all stand around and listen. The birthday guy can't believe what he just heard - but the reply from his Mom surprises him even more "Sure. It wouldn't be the first time, that I fuck for money. And you look nice, so I would give you an extra blowjob for free."

Carl is shocked o hear how his Mom talks "Mom, how can you?"
"Wait, you are Carls mom? Oh sorry, I didn't know that. In that case ..."
"Hey, don't chicken out. You offered me money, so let's fuck ..."

 

[Grimfalcon]

You could have some fun with this one, add a bit of humor into the whole situation. Maybe switch things around a little though, and have this guys friends hire a stripper/ prostitute for his bithday party. (Say off chance he doesn't know what his mom does) The kids all excited about getting laid and the stripper shows up and it's his mom.
They act like they don't know each other for his benifit. (Could make this incest or not) She gives him a lap dance and he can't help from getting hard, yet is disgusted by the fact. His mom plays the roll thoughout the night of flirtting with his friends, maybe fucks a few of them in the back room, but everyone is wondering why poor little Johnny, the birthday body, still doesn't want to take the hot-ass stripper in the back and knock a piece off.
Yeah, this is a cool idea. You could have some fun with this one alright.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

a similar story idea:

The mom ain't a stripper. But she is a cougar. She had no sex since quite some time. So when she hears that her son invited some of his young buddies, she thinks this is her chance to get some young cocks ...

So in the middle of the party, she comes in, wearing a dress with a big cleavage. She holds a tray with some drinks and snacks on it. Then she says: "I thought I can make some small things for you. So, what do you guys want? Drinks? Snacks? Blowjobs?"

She sits down and pulls her dress up to show her naked pussy. It doesn't take long until she swallows the first load ...

 

[Grimfalcon]

a similar story idea:

The mom ain't a stripper. But she is a cougar. She had no sex since quite some time. So when she hears that her son invited some of his young buddies, she thinks this is her chance to get some young cocks ...

So in the middle of the party, she comes in, wearing a dress with a big cleavage. She holds a tray with some drinks and snacks on it. Then she says: "I thought I can make some small things for you. So, what do you guys want? Drinks? Snacks? Blowjobs?"

She sits down and pulls her dress up to show her naked pussy. It doesn't take long until she swallows the first load ...

I think I like the stripper idea better; a little more believable. This one reminds me of script from a porn movie or something. Not really my thing when it comes to writing.

 

[actorsub]

what about including a sister to the scene, the son doesn't know that mom helped sister to enter in this business.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

I think I like the stripper idea better; a little more believable. This one reminds me of script from a porn movie or something. Not really my thing when it comes to writing.

yeah, well, I guess this comes from watching too much milf porn ...

what about including a sister to the scene, the son doesn't know that mom helped sister to enter in this business.

This is also a cool idea. It could be like: Mom is stripping on the party and then tells them, there is another stripper. Or mayb even better (and a bigger surprise, I think) - when Mom said, she wants to ask one of her coworkers, if she could dance, she instantly of her daughter, who is a rookie stripper. Maybe she taught her all the things she has to know, and now this is her first time, she strips in public.
Of course, she does make some errors, like going to fast at some points or maybe she almost stumbles, but since she has a great body, the guys never mind. I guess some know that she is the sister of the birthday guy, others don't.
Mom told her to ignore the fact that he is her brother, just do as it would be a normal customer - and when things got heated up, she really forgets about it. During the lapdance, she takes his hands and puts them on her breasts, then she starts to touch the bulge in his pants ...
All the other guys are speechless and horny. Mom is insecure - this is almost going too far. Should she stop them? But then, she doesn't want to spoil the party ...

 

[Grimfalcon]

Nothing wrong with MILF porn, or any porn for that matter.

Another funny twist to thow into that, is some of the guys know it's his sister or mom, and being drunk decide to play a joke on him, taking the birthday kid in the back room and put a bag over his head, then lead him out after the stripper arrives. He gets a lap dance, gets turned on, maybe a blowjob, or a lap fuck and neither one of them relaize their brother and sister. Afterwords the truth is revieled and their mortified. ( Never done an incest story before, but this is a pretty good lead up either with Mom or sister.)
The next day they talk, trying to deny their feeling because what they did was 'wrong' but maybe now's there's an attraction between them now and the sex was great, who knows? A secret relationship ensues afterwards.

 

[Black_Dahlia]

Along the same lines...

Maybe Donald isn't very popular. He's moved to a new school and has trouble making friends. But it's his 18th birthday coming up and his mother thinks this will be an ideal time to have a party and invite some of his classmates over and get to know them better. But his mother still thinks of him as a little boy, and her idea of a birthday party is ice cream and balloons and maybe a clown, like Donald's 11 years old or something. He knows it would be totally embarrassing and he'd never be able to show his face in school again.

Donald's older sister, Tracy, is 22 and away at college. He phones her up and moans to her about his mother's plans, and Tracy is sympathetic and says she'll sort it out. She's a part-time stripper, which helps pay the tuition fees, though she keeps it a secret from her family. As a birthday present, she says she'll get him a stripper for his party, which will make him very popular with his classmates, and she talks one of her stripper friends into stripping at her brother's party.

At the last minute, the other stripper breaks her ankle and can't do it. Desperate not to let her brother down, Tracy decides to do it instead. No-one knows she's related to the birthday boy, so it shouldn't be a problem. She decides not to tell Donald about the change in plans, and hopes he will just go along with it. It's a bit weird, stripping for her brother, but she knows how important it is to him to look good in front of all the other boys.

But then the mother shows up. They'd shipped her off to Bingo to get her out the way, but she didn't want to miss her baby's birthday party. She is horrified to see her own daughter stripping in a room full of boys, but she sees how popular Donald is with his new friends, so keeps quiet about it. In fact, she encourages Tracy to give the birthday boy a blow job, talking to her like she's a cheap stripper slut rather than her own flesh and blood. She always suspected her daughter was a slut and now she intends to take advantage, to make Donald appear cool. Tracy, who is a slut, is happy to oblige, and ends up being used as a cum dump for all the boys.

 

[want2_watchwife]

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[actorsub]

What about the next steps? I think it could be more intriguing if sons friends continue to use his mom and sis on regular basis and start calling him "son if a bitch" and he likes this

 

[Black_Dahlia]

What about the next steps? I think it could be more intriguing if sons friends continue to use his mom and sis on regular basis and start calling him "son if a bitch" and he likes this

I think the mother would have to get involved somehow. Maybe she sees how much fun her daughter is having and wants to join in. Or maybe the boys get impatient waiting for one of Tracy's holes to become available, and decide to jump on Donald's mother instead. Of course, she doesn't put up much of a fight. The highlight of the evening would be when Donald's encouraged to fuck his own mother, or when the boys discover that Tracy is Donald's sister, and mother and daughter are talked into putting on a lesbian show.

 

[Grimfalcon]

What about the next steps? I think it could be more intriguing if sons friends continue to use his mom and sis on regular basis and start calling him "son if a bitch" and he likes this

I agree it needs to go on from there, but I'm still partial to the idea that the other boys don't know it's his sister, or maybe even his mom for that matter. Maybe he's new in town? How about the party is over at another guys house and our shy 'guy' character was simply invited over? ( I know, deviating from the original idea herebut I think we'd see a much more realistic setting and plot develop in this case).
So, mom and sis turn out to be strippers and whores, they get talked into a lesbian scene as well as being cum buckets for all the guys and the kid can still end up having sex with one or both of them, encouraged by the other guys, to be accepted into their group. Maybe he was a mamma's boy and was screwing her in the first place?

As for a continuation, how about the son ends up pimping out his mom and sis to his friends since they are so popular as a team? Maybe sis and mom start doing Frat houses back at college or call girl type of stuff? I don't know, just throwing out some random thoughts.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

I think the mother would have to get involved somehow. Maybe she sees how much fun her daughter is having and wants to join in. Or maybe the boys get impatient waiting for one of Tracy's holes to become available, and decide to jump on Donald's mother instead. Of course, she doesn't put up much of a fight. The highlight of the evening would be when Donald's encouraged to fuck his own mother, or when the boys discover that Tracy is Donald's sister, and mother and daughter are talked into putting on a lesbian show.

Overall, I think this sounds good. But I think the other guys shouldn't encourage to fuck Mom or Sister.
It could be more like: the women (or maybe just one of them) take care of the boys, except for Donald. Since it happens in the middle of the party room, everybody watches the gang bang. Only Donald stands a little bit aside and is sad. He would love to join, but this would be incest. But then, suddenly, one of the women looks at him and realizes how unfair it is. He is the birthday boy and he is the only one who is left aside?
So they call him, and tell him to join the fun and don't care about anything ...

The question however is: what will be about the next day? Donald realizes how horny his Mom and Sister are. He would love to repeat what has happened on the birthday party (but without his buddies). So can he fuck them again, or was this "one-time-only" sex?

 

[NASCARaddicted]

I agree it needs to go on from there, but I'm still partial to the idea that the other boys don't know it's his sister, or maybe even his mom for that matter. Maybe he's new in town? How about the party is over at another guys house and our shy 'guy' character was simply invited over? ( I know, deviating from the original idea herebut I think we'd see a much more realistic setting and plot develop in this case).
So, mom and sis turn out to be strippers and whores, they get talked into a lesbian scene as well as being cum buckets for all the guys and the kid can still end up having sex with one or both of them, encouraged by the other guys, to be accepted into their group. Maybe he was a mamma's boy and was screwing her in the first place?

As for a continuation, how about the son ends up pimping out his mom and sis to his friends since they are so popular as a team? Maybe sis and mom start doing Frat houses back at college or call girl type of stuff? I don't know, just throwing out some random thoughts.

I like it. The son asks his Mom and Sister if they could work as waitresses. They look around for some outfits but all they find are skimpy little waitress outfits. Sister jokes "if I wear this, they would think I am a stripper."
Son thinks about it and then he asks them, if they would do that. Both Mom and Sister are bold and open minded. They think it is fun.

So they strip at the party. And when they are naked, one of the guy suggests: "what about a BJ for the birthday boy?"
As I said, Mom and Sister are open minded, so one of them accepts the offer without hesitating. Maybe Sister is really open minded and sucked many dicks before. So just another one doesn't matter, even though it's her brothers dick ..

 

[Kim_vegas]

I like this one. Just a little twist. Sally falls sick so Mom steps in to save the party as her son has bragged about the stripper so much that the absence of the stripper would be quite disturbing to his reputation that he tried hard to build. So they plan out that they will skip out the lap dance part. His mom will show up, perform and leave. In a feather mask covering up half her face and fiery red colored hair would make her almont unrecognizable. Plan sounds safe. Party starts. She comes in, performs .. but somehow she is forced to give carl a 'pantyless' lapdance.. (say she got carried away and lost a bet with her son's friend .. and this friend asked her to give B'day boy a lapdance without panties as his b'day present.) .. now under given circumstances .. both are reluctant but to keep their cover safe .. they do it .. and both being too excited end up having an intercourse. Carl gets drunk and passes out. Some oh his friends take his mom .. together and as well as in turns .. all holes .. some vdo tape too ...

next day Carl wakes up with hangover .. goes to school .. finds out everyone talking about his bash .. the hot stripper .. their fuck stories and some even have her pictures. The only thing that keeps him from freaking out is that his mother is still wearing that mask in pics and vdo clips .. and no one has fucking idea that she is his mother .... the story ends with other guys asking for this strippers number .. as their birthdays' are coming up soon ..

and that can start another story !

 

[Black_Dahlia]

I like this one. Just a little twist. Sally falls sick so Mom steps in to save the party as her son has bragged about the stripper so much that the absence of the stripper would be quite disturbing to his reputation that he tried hard to build. So they plan out that they will skip out the lap dance part. His mom will show up, perform and leave. In a feather mask covering up half her face and fiery red colored hair would make her almont unrecognizable. Plan sounds safe. Party starts. She comes in, performs .. but somehow she is forced to give carl a 'pantyless' lapdance.. (say she got carried away and lost a bet with her son's friend .. and this friend asked her to give B'day boy a lapdance without panties as his b'day present.) .. now under given circumstances .. both are reluctant but to keep their cover safe .. they do it .. and both being too excited end up having an intercourse. Carl gets drunk and passes out. Some oh his friends take his mom .. together and as well as in turns .. all holes .. some vdo tape too ...

next day Carl wakes up with hangover .. goes to school .. finds out everyone talking about his bash .. the hot stripper .. their fuck stories and some even have her pictures. The only thing that keeps him from freaking out is that his mother is still wearing that mask in pics and vdo clips .. and no one has fucking idea that she is his mother .... the story ends with other guys asking for this strippers number .. as their birthdays' are coming up soon ..

and that can start another story !

I like everything about this except the feather mask idea, which I think wouldn't last long in a room full of horny young guys. Maybe if she dyed her hair, wore hooker make-up and even had some fake tattoos, that would be enough to keep her son's friends from guessing her true identity. Also the slutty clothes she wears when she arrives, and the fact that the boys wouldn't expect a respectable woman like his mother to do something so outrageous. It could happen...

 

[Kim_vegas]

I guess getting a fake "mask" tattoo can do .. something like 'bat girl' ....

 

[NASCARaddicted]

It could also be like it was said earlier: they are new in town. So the other guys don't know she is his mother.

Of course, if they start to know her after some time, they will realize the truth ...

Edit: I just looked at the Batgirl image. This could really work. The boy is a big Batman fan. So Mom decides to dress up as Batgirl. This would explain the facemask. And since the facemask was missing on this costume, she uses makeup ...

 

[Grimfalcon]

I like this one. Just a little twist. Sally falls sick so Mom steps in to save the party as her son has bragged about the stripper so much that the absence of the stripper would be quite disturbing to his reputation that he tried hard to build. So they plan out that they will skip out the lap dance part. His mom will show up, perform and leave. In a feather mask covering up half her face and fiery red colored hair would make her almont unrecognizable. Plan sounds safe. Party starts. She comes in, performs .. but somehow she is forced to give carl a 'pantyless' lapdance.. (say she got carried away and lost a bet with her son's friend .. and this friend asked her to give B'day boy a lapdance without panties as his b'day present.) .. now under given circumstances .. both are reluctant but to keep their cover safe .. they do it .. and both being too excited end up having an intercourse. Carl gets drunk and passes out. Some oh his friends take his mom .. together and as well as in turns .. all holes .. some vdo tape too ...

next day Carl wakes up with hangover .. goes to school .. finds out everyone talking about his bash .. the hot stripper .. their fuck stories and some even have her pictures. The only thing that keeps him from freaking out is that his mother is still wearing that mask in pics and vdo clips .. and no one has fucking idea that she is his mother .... the story ends with other guys asking for this strippers number .. as their birthdays' are coming up soon ..

and that can start another story !

Have to agree; I like this concept as well. It just adds a bit fun mystery to the plot when no one knows that's his mom or sister. As for the Batgirl thing, sure it works and furthers the story line. Good idea
I can't wait to see this one on paper; going to be pretty crazy cool if any one does it.

 

[Kim_vegas]

Have to agree; I like this concept as well. It just adds a bit fun mystery to the plot when no one knows that's his mom or sister. As for the Batgirl thing, sure it works and furthers the story line. Good idea
I can't wait to see this one on paper; going to be pretty crazy cool if any one does it.

started working on it already .. 1st page is done!

anyone wanna help with script and dialogues?

 

[Grimfalcon]

started working on it already .. 1st page is done!

anyone wanna help with script and dialogues?

That's cool! I can't wait to see this one. Think it's going to be pretty hot.
Sure, I'm in for a helper sort of role, but I'm concentrating on some of the later chapters of 'Red' at the moment. PM me if you need something, though. I'll do what I can.