More Nude Beach Bride?

sirhugs

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Almost 21 yearsago, I wrote a Loving Wives tale called Nude Beach Bride for the Nude Day contest. This was back before LW became such a cesspool category.
I don't recall when I made the decision, but I think itwas always conceived as a multi-chapter story.I especially loved the bride character, and was very much in the period when wanton brides were part of my core fantasies. Over two years, I eventually wrote 8 chapters. Though chapter 8 has an ending, I don't deny that the honeymoon was not yet over. I can't recall nineteen years later why I did not write chapter 9. I know I had a lot going on in my life at the time. Maybe the end of my own marriage, followed by another failed relationship, changed my feelings. maybe I was just to focused on moving and parenting.
From time to time, I have had requests for another chapter. normally, I shrug, appreciate the support, but figure the commentator has not noticed how long ago I wrote NBB.
I even started a sequel once, but trying to build in all the characters and past action bogged me down so I abandoned it. That was on a previous hard drive and is lost forever. It was intended to be a 20th anniversary return to the resort.
So now I find myself wondering whether it would be worth one more try.
Anybody who has been paying attention, especially over on the AH knows that I am struggling both metally and physically. I really stalled writing my Swap story. So by no means am I sure I'd want to commit to another NBB adventure. I have one WIP that is my priority and want to submit a couple more after that to get to at least 200 stories while I can.
But I thought I'd put it out for discussion while my health is not TOO poor.
How could I write it in a way that avoids sprawl and stays focused?
is it even worth it?
Is LW such a sewer that I should just focus my waning energy on other categories, like the incest/TM/CD self-challenge?
(answers will be more helpful if you read at least the begining of the story and the end. Feel free to enjoy it all)
Finally, I promise to consider all constructive replies, but give no guatrantees I will feel the urge. Yet here I am, wondering...
 
You've already got plenty on your plate.
But there's no harm in at least planning something out.
But if it were me. I would revisit the characters from NBB allowing for the same amount of time to have passed in their world as it has in yours. A vow renewal and second honeymoon? Maybe they meet a young couple on their first honeymoon and things get spicy.
 
You've already got plenty on your plate.
But there's no harm in at least planning something out.
But if it were me. I would revisit the characters from NBB allowing for the same amount of time to have passed in their world as it has in yours. A vow renewal and second honeymoon? Maybe they meet a young couple on their first honeymoon and things get spicy.
they met tons of people on the first honeymoon (new people every chapter). One of my mistakes when I tried this before was planning to try working in all the prior characters.
 
they met tons of people on the first honeymoon (new people every chapter). One of my mistakes when I tried this before was planning to try working in all the prior characters.
Yep. A stand-alone with the main characters and a new supporting cast is the way to go. Less backstory to worry about.
 
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