hi,most of the time(if not all) in incest stories the mother gets the son or sister gets brother in an EASY WAY and vice-versa,why dont you give a larger area -for example- how the mother teases her boy by her clothing,joking,and her LOGICAL plan to get him,or the son how he gets his hot mom and how hard he worked to get her, i think this will be mor mor exciting.
sorry for bothering,and thanks for ur replys
sorry for bothering,and thanks for ur replys