Mom Son See Cock

[loadedgun]

Here's an idea along the same vain as the other stories I've written but to be fair, GradyPeen actually emailed me the inspiration to this story:

A son who gets his mom to look at his dick because he thinks something is wrong.

It's 's scheme to get her to touch it. He makes her think that it's "not working right" and he eventually gets her to let him show it to her. After a few other failed attempts she let's him again but this time he's hard and she feels uneasy but he makes her think it's just casual and not sexual. And he gets her to inspect it by touching it. She tries to grab it without it looking like she's jacking him off but it's difficult not to grab it that way. He gets her to kind of move her hands on it but she eventually stops because it's awkward. More time goes on and he convinces her again and he's hard again. He somehow gets her to spit on it because he says it makes it feel better. She rubs it in and strokes his dick with her spit. She becomes more comfortable doing these things because she's trying to help. The next few times time he tries to convince her to suck it because it would be better but she refuses. Then a few weeks later he actually convinces her to do it and he cums all over her.


Suppose he pretends that he's been bitten in his sleep when in actual fact he just pinched it so it looks red. Gets mom to inspect it daily to make sure nothing is wrong. A few days later when she is inspecting it, he says that she should spit on it as it's soothing. She complies. This is repeated for a few days.

He then asks her one day to blow hot air on it. She reluctantly complies.

A few days later he asks her to apply the spit really closely and he pushes his dick into her mouth - apparently loosing his balance. This happens a few more times and repeated a few more days.

Later still he convinces her that he's getting worse and she needs to suck the poison out - this time the sting is right by the head. She is really reluctantly complies until he shoots all over her.


Any thoughts?

 

[Mello_SixtyNine]

Unless his mom is a moron, you need to think of a better scenario to sell it. Pinching his hard dick is not going to work because most dicks get reddish while engorged with blood. Maybe something like this:

Jake's mom likes to hit the wine hard while watching her favorite weekly show (a fact that her son knows well). The show is a hot soap with a lot of sexual escapades. Also, the husband is out of the picture (divorce, widowed...fact is she's lonely & horny).

Jake bides his time for that perfect moment when her mental faculties are at her weakest state due to her inebriation. He comes up to her and asks for help but is really embarrassed & he doesn't know what to do. He mentions that he's been having painful erections lately...he's had erections in the past but that for some reason he's been noticing that his recent erections have lasted a long time and have gotten painful (a blatant lie, btw).

(Using his best acting skills) With a hint of desperation, he asks his mom if she could examine it. Jake asks if she can see something visibly wrong with it. (He had been jerking off for a while before walking in so he was already close to popping his load).

In her drunken state, she does as he asks. She's surprised that his son has such a big cock...it looks painfully erect. Timidly, her fingers gently moving along his thick, pulsing shaft...examining it inch by inch. She needs to use both hands due to his impressive girth and length. Her face is just inches away from his manhood. It doesn't take long before he blows his load all over his mom's face. A blast flies directly into her surprised gaping mouth. (Jake apologizing profusely - again acting).

 

[loadedgun]

My stories are all unbelievable. I don't make them realistic as I don't think these things should be happening in real life. I write cartoons or caricatures of silly situations between moms and sons.

This is not to everyone's taste and I get that...

 

[Mello_SixtyNine]

All of the incest stories here are unbelievable. The authors of the highest rated stories (on the most part) devise a plausible scenario that sells the story (separated at birth, halloween mask, blackmail, etc).

There are plenty of examples of crappy, unbelievable stories in that category where the writer will have two relatives miraculously having sex after a paragraph. The test of a good author is to work out a story where that taboo interaction could possibly happen in a natural or uncontrived way.

I think that's the main reason why the four stories I've submitted have rated high enough to receive the red H.