Mom son incest

[sumptuouscove]

2 Mothers and their 2 sons went on a mountain trip.
1st couple: Shaina and Kevin.

2nd couple : Mary and Mathew
Mothers are beautiful, Elegant, lively and are single parents.

At the tour they had booked 2 hotel rooms. 1 for mothers Shaina and Mary and another for sons Kevin and Mathew. They all party in one room, had whisky together and everyone was heavily inebriated. KEVIN left the party room and went to sleep in his room, leaving both the mothers and Matt. SHAINA could not find her son KEVIN there, thinking not to disturb her MARY and her MATHEW. she also decided to sleep but in inebriated state she went in the same room that of her son. Late in the night her son woke up and felt her on the bed. It was dark. He thought she is someone else and then he removes her panties and licks and fondle her but couldn't fuck her because he too was drunk. And slept. His mother also didn't object thinking it was MATHEW and it's just once for the party she can have fun too as she was a single for a long time. She is not promiscuous but her sense of judgment left her at that moment.

In the morning SHAINA come to know about her state of clothing and realised who she slept with. It was Kevin who fondled and kissed, licked her.

Later Kevin apologies to his mom and she also doesn't blame him. Tension ensues. Kevin now start desiring his mom. He wants more but Shaina his mother resists. Shaina shares this all to Mary who suggested Shaina to counsel her son not to think like that. But still after a long resistance Shaina gives in as she loved her only son also because Kevin treated her very nicely and later seduced her.

Later KEVIN disclosed this intimacy and story to MATHEW. Matt understands his emotions. Later they also helped Them to get married.

 

[DarkSollat]

she went in the same room that of her son. Late in the night her son woke up and felt her on the bed. It was dark. He thought she is someone else and then he removes her panties and licks and fondle her

It killed the idea for me. I mean he wakes up, see someone and is like: yeah, let's fondle that ass

 

[sumptuouscove]

How would you like it to be? Give your layout please

 

[OverconfidentSarcasm]

I have to second what DarkSollat wrote.

Personally, I'm just not a big fan of 'suspension of disbelief'. I like it when the Characters have proper motivations for their actions and the plot-line makes sense. If I wanted senseless porn, I'd watch something on pornhub. It just feels super weird to imagine someone waking up, drunk or not, and start eating out every random butt they see.

Maybe if he just broke up with someone who looked a lot like that woman, and in his inebriated state thought he was back home in his own bed, next to that partner again, then his decision to eat her out without question would be somewhat believable. But when a human is so drunk they don't even know where they are anymore, I doubt they'd be good for anything, really.

 

[gunhilltrain]

I assume you have been around here long enough to know that incest is hugely popular on this site. Note the most viewed stories list.

https://www.literotica.com/top/most-read-erotic-stories/

The top ten all have either mother-son or brother-sister incest. Number 4 seems to have both. (Sorry, impregnating one's own mom is not one of my fetishes.) Number 13 seems to be a repeat of number 1. Thus you have plenty of competition in this field.

Also: "Matt understands his emotions. Later they also helped Them to get married." Married? What is the age difference between these two people?

But go ahead, write it. You already have the bones of the plot there. It would be your first submission since you joined ten years ago. Seriously, fill in the details and you have your story.

 

[sirhugs]

momcest seldom does much for me. but as ght says, it is hugely popular. He is also correct that this outline is ready to roll. It just needs some details added.

 

[LupusDei]

He thought she is someone else and then he removes her panties and licks and fondle her but couldn't fuck her because he too was drunk. And slept.

Well, yes, not to pile up on this, but indeed, molesting the woman found in his bed without care who's it is... is not unbelievable in a drunken stupor half asleep, but only barely so, and needs some, say, background.

And he may realize whom he's fondling, eventually, momentarily, but decide it's she who came to his bed and thus obviously wanted it and more, and in his altered state of mind it makes perfect sense (also support the fact he stuck at such, and it didn't become just a huge yuck moment in the morning).

But yeah, Kevin's definitely not a virgin, probably been to a group sex orgy or few, and/or a girlfriend or two they used to heavily drink together, and had been having thoughts about his mom, admitted consciously or not.

 

[LupusDei]

And he may realize whom he's fondling, eventually, momentarily, but decide it's she who came to his bed and thus obviously wanted it and more, and in his altered state of mind it makes perfect sense.

I would show him going through a string of guesses while cuddling, that would include his mom initially dismissed as a possibility, as were all the others. Then he would misinterpret her responses, or rather perfectly clearly interpret her confused responses, and he decides she wants it, despite more than half aware it's mom, but fuck it, actually he always had wanted her, he may rationalize no matter is it true or not, and now here she is.

 

[DarkSollat]

Add some more people to the party. Then, Kevin flirts with some girl with the same hair as his mom, and mistake her for her in bed. Maybe in his drunken states he think he slept with that girl earlier and forget about it thanks to an alcohol.

 

[gunhilltrain]

momcest seldom does much for me. but as ght says, it is hugely popular. He is also correct that this outline is ready to roll. It just needs some details added.

I was trying to inspire him to actually write the thing, but he hasn't responded. He did have a second post that said, "Give your layout please."

 

[LupusDei]

He thought she is someone else

I would show him going through a string of guesses while cuddling, that would include his mom initially dismissed as a possibility, as were all the others. Then he would misinterpret her responses, or rather perfectly clearly interpret her confused responses, and he decides she wants it, despite more than half aware it's mom, but fuck it, actually he always had wanted her, he may rationalize no matter is it true or not, and now here she is.

But of course, it would be what he says next morning when confronted -- that he thought it was someone else --, but that would be a cover story to excuse his unhinged behavior. And if he be smart about it, he would pack that with as many compliments to the woman he actually was with, no mater knowingly or not. That that woman happened to have been his own mother is just a peculiar fact in their shared history now.

Like,

"Yeah, sorry, I thought I was with Jane Watters. You know, my girlfriend's girlfriend? I think you've seen her. She has almost as generous bosom, the same womanly hips and full size bottom. I was only surprised when she had grown such a nice thick bush. I understand why she does it, but don't dig the baby smooth shaved look, honestly. Well, she's a lesbian, but everyone knows she's only a lesbian when she's sober. Still, that's why I held my dick away, she'd sometimes freaked out afterwards."

"Good try champion, but you were just too damn drunk."

"Well yeah, maybe, that too. I'm so sorry."

And it doesn't matter if he has not a first idea about Jane's intimate hairstyle, or if his (ex?)girlfriend had never had sex with Jane either. She's the sweetest prettiest girl mom may have ever seen in his presence, all so nice in that exaggerated lesbian femme way. And framing it how he did works towards a wide range of goals in very few words, diminish both his previous relationship and seriousness of what happened at the same time. Also, note he already apologizing about not fucking her in superposition with for overindulging on alchohol, expecting at least one to be accepted, and the other by extension. It's a calculated risk, sure, but he may get away with it and plant a seed.

 

[sumptuouscove]

I was trying to inspire him to actually write the thing, but he hasn't responded. He did have a second post that said, "Give your layout please."

 

[sumptuouscove]

Thanks for the input. Actually you all are right, I too wanted to put a believable plot and the bed scene was ruining it, I might take your suggestion and put in these reasoning. Thanks. The son wants her mom, but how can I make it believable that the mother didn't object to his fondling. Could there be any other plot. Suggest please.

 

[sirhugs]

Thanks for the input. Actually you all are right, I too wanted to put a believable plot and the bed scene was ruining it, I might take your suggestion and put in these reasoning. Thanks. The son wants her mom, but how can I make it believable that the mother didn't object to his fondling. Could there be any other plot. Suggest please.

at first, she is too shocked to react. Then, he treats it like a joke. By the time she knows it is more than teasing, she likes it.

 

[DarkSollat]

Thanks for the input. Actually you all are right, I too wanted to put a believable plot and the bed scene was ruining it, I might take your suggestion and put in these reasoning. Thanks. The son wants her mom, but how can I make it believable that the mother didn't object to his fondling. Could there be any other plot. Suggest please.

Don't worry, incest stories are beluveable only in incestverse anyway

I think the fact that she felt good being fondled and tgat he's so sweet with compliments is enough.

 

[gunhilltrain]

Thanks for the input. Actually you all are right, I too wanted to put a believable plot and the bed scene was ruining it, I might take your suggestion and put in these reasoning. Thanks. The son wants her mom, but how can I make it believable that the mother didn't object to his fondling. Could there be any other plot. Suggest please.

I don't think I actually suggested anything specific, beyond you just trying to write it and seeing what happens.

About the only thing that occurred to me is, "Where is this happening? What mountains do you mean?" With names like Mary, Kevin, and Matthew (not Mathew?), I doubt that it's in India, correct? Or are they tourists from someplace else?

 

[lovecraft68]

I don't think I actually suggested anything specific, beyond you just trying to write it and seeing what happens.

About the only thing that occurred to me is, "Where is this happening? What mountains do you mean?" With names like Mary, Kevin, and Matthew (not Mathew?), I doubt that it's in India, correct? Or are they tourists from someplace else?

I never saw that list before.
I have #'s 50 and 54.
Neither are in incest.

 

[RoperTrace]

Thanks for the input. Actually you all are right, I too wanted to put a believable plot and the bed scene was ruining it, I might take your suggestion and put in these reasoning. Thanks. The son wants her mom, but how can I make it believable that the mother didn't object to his fondling. Could there be any other plot. Suggest please.

My advice, and I've never written an incest story, is to do the story your way especially if it's your first. Don't try to make it any more believable, or perfect it. Just go with your gut, submit it, and incest fans will love it. Then you can work on more believable story lines on the next dozen stories you publish.

Personally, I can see a very drunken son getting amorous with a naked body that suddenly appears in the bed next to him, and the part where he can't perform is believable. Maybe in his drunken state, he recognizes his mom's perfume, or the other mom's scent.

 

[sumptuouscove]

Thank you all for your response. I am going to rewrite the plot and will post it soon for you all. Your valuable response has helped me to rethink it in a better way. Some of the feedbacks have been really helpful and intriguing. Thank you.

 

[sumptuouscove]

I never saw that list before.
I have #'s 50 and 54.
Neither are in incest.

Didn't get you. Can you elaborate please. You are my one of the favourite writer.

 

[lovecraft68]

Didn't get you. Can you elaborate please. You are my one of the favourite writer.

I was referring to the list someone else provided of most viewed stories.

https://www.literotica.com/top/most-read-erotic-stories/

I have the #50 and 54 ranked stories on the list, one is in Mature and one in First time.

Thank you for the compliment.