Mom son incest romance

[sumptuouscove]

Plot:

The world has undergone a huge COVID wave. But the worst is yet to come. There's new COVID 19 variant which causes infection to person having different DNA. This variant does not spread among people having same DNA. Also this variant is most lethal and infects by just touching, breathing closely and mating with person having different DNA but not infect if same DNA people mate together.


After the arrival of this new variant it's very difficult to socialize or go out with anyone as everyone is scared with the new variant that causes the infection to people having different DNA.

Rahul(son 21) and Shaina (mother 39) has no relative left alive. Almost everyone they know is dead. They have nobody now who they can rely upon.

This situation causes the son to stop dating and socializing. Eventually the mother encourage her son to go out with girls as he also has to live his life and get it's experience but it's practically impossible for obvious reasons. Rahul is virgin . They decide to celebrate their own dinner date at home since they cannot go out with anyone. This dinner date becomes a routine between them and they grow closer. Rahul buys her a cute sundress and lingerie and asks Shaina to try out for him. She sense that this dates are taking a toll on her son and she tries to make him understand that it's not good to think about her that way. It's wrong for him to fantasise about his own mother. Rahul tells her that she is only one left with him who is his best friend, mother everything now. She resists his advances and subtle flirtatious talks.
But she doesn't want to disappoint her son so she tries out the dress and lingerie. Rahul asks her to model it for him. He than implores her for a dance, slow dance and than he does the unexpected he kisses her. She pushes him back but continue the regular dates because she doesn't want their relationship to go sour. Rahul continue to cajole her and tells her that he loves her. He tells her that it's okay to have physical relationship because there's no one to judge them. It's just one life and let him love you like a man as he is deeply in love with her. Shaina asks him what does he think of her, what does he fantasise about her. He tells her that he had always found her beautiful and attractive but couldn't do anything about it as he was afraid to act on his feelings.
After a lot of resistance and no no Finally they do the inevitable.




How do I proceed with this? I want this long and slow which finally leads to amazing love making.

 

[sumptuouscove]

Ple

Plot:

The world has undergone a huge COVID wave. But the worst is yet to come. There's new COVID 19 variant which causes infection to person having different DNA. This variant does not spread among people having same DNA. Also this variant is most lethal and infects by just touching, breathing closely and mating with person having different DNA but not infect if same DNA people mate together.


After the arrival of this new variant it's very difficult to socialize or go out with anyone as everyone is scared with the new variant that causes the infection to people having different DNA.

Rahul(son 21) and Shaina (mother 39) has no relative left alive. Almost everyone they know is dead. They have nobody now who they can rely upon.

This situation causes the son to stop dating and socializing. Eventually the mother encourage her son to go out with girls as he also has to live his life and get it's experience but it's practically impossible for obvious reasons. Rahul is virgin . They decide to celebrate their own dinner date at home since they cannot go out with anyone. This dinner date becomes a routine between them and they grow closer. Rahul buys her a cute sundress and lingerie and asks Shaina to try out for him. She sense that this dates are taking a toll on her son and she tries to make him understand that it's not good to think about her that way. It's wrong for him to fantasise about his own mother. Rahul tells her that she is only one left with him who is his best friend, mother everything now. She resists his advances and subtle flirtatious talks.
But she doesn't want to disappoint her son so she tries out the dress and lingerie. Rahul asks her to model it for him. He than implores her for a dance, slow dance and than he does the unexpected he kisses her. She pushes him back but continue the regular dates because she doesn't want their relationship to go sour. Rahul continue to cajole her and tells her that he loves her. He tells her that it's okay to have physical relationship because there's no one to judge them. It's just one life and let him love you like a man as he is deeply in love with her. Shaina asks him what does he think of her, what does he fantasise about her. He tells her that he had always found her beautiful and attractive but couldn't do anything about it as he was afraid to act on his feelings.
After a lot of resistance and no no Finally they do the inevitable.




How do I proceed with this? I want this long and slow which finally leads to amazing love making.

Please leave a thought.

 

[Rob_Royale]

The story has to build so you have to create a story that evolves over time. So you'll need to plan out the timeline for this romance. Try an outline.
Monday. The couple do an activity, and this unexpectedly happens.
Wednesday - The couple do this and that, and this happens
Each activity and occurrence builds on the other that happened before. So you'll need to plan out a list of activities and interests they both share. They are in a lockdown situation, so it can be as simple as a game of chess, to spending the night camping under the stars. Romance is about character building, IMO.
Also, if he's having to convince her, it's not really romance either. Both characters should evolve to the point of the realization, that the attraction is there, other options are slim and they are the only source of comfort they have, so why the hell not? That's the real taboo, each character breaking down the barriers.

 

[sumptuouscove]

Yes he has to convince her. She resists his sexual advances but is not cold. She knows what he wants. But he convinces her to drop her barriers and later romanticism ensues.

 

[Rob_Royale]

Yes he has to convince her. She resists his sexual advances but is not cold. She knows what he wants. But he convinces her to drop her barriers and later romanticism ensues.

Then technically that wouldn't be romance. That would be no-consent/reluctance.

 

[sumptuouscove]

It will be romance which turn later in the story. I got confused with my other story. I beg your pardon.

 

[Rob_Royale]

No it will be romance as she is making love with her husband only, it's just that the husband's body has been exchanged by that of the son's. The lovemaking is happening with her consent no??

You seem to be confusing your story ideas. This one is about the mom/son Covid lockdown, not the body/swap.

 

[Djmac1031]

Interesting outline.

But if you're going for "romance," you might need to tweak it a bit, because it sounds less like "romance" and more like "pressured."

Obviously, as you actually write the story, I'm sure you can flesh out more details to make it more romantic, two family members in love and attracted to each other yet struggling with the taboo issue, and less "horny lonely son pressures mom into sex."

Good luck with it. I'll be interested in seeing the final product

 

[lovecraft68]

Then technically that wouldn't be romance. That would be no-consent/reluctance.

It depends how he convinces her, he could keep trying and do so emotionally and the mother sees he really loves her and its not all about sex.
Even as I type that I'm thinking, jeez how bad does this sound in real life terms.
Then I think about how many stories I've done in this category and....yeah....

 

[sumptuouscove]

You seem to be confusing your story ideas. This one is about the mom/son Covid lockdown, not the body/swap.

It will be romance which turn later in the story. I got confused with my other story. I beg your pardon

 

[sumptuouscove]

It depends how he convinces her, he could keep trying and do so emotionally and the mother sees he really loves her and its not all about sex.
Even as I type that I'm thinking, jeez how bad does this sound in real life terms.
Then I think about how many stories I've done in this category and....yeah....

Thanks for the input

It depends how he convinces her, he could keep trying and do so emotionally and the mother sees he really loves her and its not all about sex.
Even as I type that I'm thinking, jeez how bad does this sound in real life terms.
Then I think about how many stories I've done in this category and....yeah....

Yeah that's the plot I want. They have gone through a lot and they have nobody to rely upon. The son convinces her with his genuine emotional gestures. And the mother also sees that he loves her in real sense and it's not all about sex. But then also it's a very big taboo thing to cross so she resists mentally and tries to keep the relationship close as emotional as possible but later gives in to physical love which is the ultimate point in their relationship.

 

[sumptuouscove]

Interesting outline.

But if you're going for "romance," you might need to tweak it a bit, because it sounds less like "romance" and more like "pressured."

Obviously, as you actually write the story, I'm sure you can flesh out more details to make it more romantic, two family members in love and attracted to each other yet struggling with the taboo issue, and less "horny lonely son pressures mom into sex."

Good luck with it. I'll be interested in seeing the final product

No there's no pressure, just some emotional convincing

 

[SimonDoom]

For it to work as a "romance" I think it works better if the pursuit is not too one-sided. There are two problems if it's one-sided. One is that the son may come across as unappealing and pushy if he's trying too hard to win a reluctant mother. As others have pointed out, it may seem more like non-con than romance. The other is that it may not be realistic. The son is just 21. He's a virgin, so he's not experienced. It doesn't sound realistic to me that the son would be a self-assured romancer with a good plan to seduce his mom. He's likely to be shy, nervous, unsure of himself and of what to do and how to seduce his mom.

Romance usually works like this: the readers figure out early on that both characters are "right" for each other, but there's something that holds each of the characters back from understanding this themselves. Circumstances change, the truth is revealed, and they can fall in love.

Make sure you make the son likable and appealing. The reader should WANT the son to succeed, which means the reader must sympathize with the son. Have the son do some nice things for Mom. Or maybe his attempts to woo her go awry at times and Mom feels a need to help him be "more of a man."

The way you describe it, it sounds like you're going to tell the story from Mom's point of view. That's a big factor as well -- whose story will you tell?

 

[sumptuouscove]

This is exactly what I want from the story. I want to tell the story as a narrator (3rd person) not from son view. For example of I start with any episode it will be like this: 'X' (The son) always had huge crush on his mom. He fantasised about her in various situations. X have always dreamt to touch her like a man, to fondle her and have always thought what it would be like to feel her pussy with his own cock. He always thought that the sex with her has to be amazing because of the taboo and the relationship they share. It's not a regular bond between two regular people, they are mother and son. And that's what appealed to X more than anything. To top that she was utterly beautiful and young. However X didn't know how to proceed with his imagination. He thought to put it in action that's how he can find out the consequence.


So this is how I want to write the tale. Ofcourse I want the reader to want him to succeed or else why the reader is even here to read in the first place. As the mother has some uncanny skill to know what son has in mind but she doesn't know how to stop him. Sometimes she teases him and takes his flirting sportingly but stop him if he tries to cross a line. This continues and finally the son succeed to woo her.

 

[sumptuouscove]

This is exactly what I want from the story. I want to tell the story as a narrator (3rd person) not from son view. For example of I start with any episode it will be like this: 'X' (The son) always had huge crush on his mom. He fantasised about her in various situations. X have always dreamt to touch her like a man, to fondle her and have always thought what it would be like to feel her pussy with his own cock. He always thought that the sex with her has to be amazing because of the taboo and the relationship they share. It's not a regular bond between two regular people, they are mother and son. And that's what appealed to X more than anything. To top that she was utterly beautiful and young. However X didn't know how to proceed with his imagination. He thought to put it in action that's how he can find out the consequence.


So this is how I want to write the tale. Ofcourse I want the reader to want him to succeed or else why the reader is even here to read in the first place. As the mother has some uncanny skill to know what son has in mind but she doesn't know how to stop him. Sometimes she teases him and takes his flirting sportingly but stop him if he tries to cross a line. This continues and finally the son succeed to woo her.

I honestly don't know what non- consesual category is. Is it something where in the sex doesn't happen at all? Can you explain please.

 

[SimonDoom]

This is exactly what I want from the story. I want to tell the story as a narrator (3rd person) not from son view. For example of I start with any episode it will be like this: 'X' (The son) always had huge crush on his mom. He fantasised about her in various situations. X have always dreamt to touch her like a man, to fondle her and have always thought what it would be like to feel her pussy with his own cock. He always thought that the sex with her has to be amazing because of the taboo and the relationship they share. It's not a regular bond between two regular people, they are mother and son. And that's what appealed to X more than anything. To top that she was utterly beautiful and young. However X didn't know how to proceed with his imagination. He thought to put it in action that's how he can find out the consequence.


So this is how I want to write the tale. Ofcourse I want the reader to want him to succeed or else why the reader is even here to read in the first place. As the mother has some uncanny skill to know what son has in mind but she doesn't know how to stop him. Sometimes she teases him and takes his flirting sportingly but stop him if he tries to cross a line. This continues and finally the son succeed to woo her.

I wrote a long 8-chapter series about a son pursuing his mom, so I understand the appeal of wanting to write the story this way.

Give a lot of thought to whether you want the story in third person POV to reveal just the son's thoughts or the mom's thoughts as well. The advantage of confining POV to one character is you add the element of surprise and mystery: the reader and the narrator do NOT know what one of the primary characters is thinking.

This is how I did it in my mom-son series, and so I was able to add a surprise at the end that a lot of readers seemed to like.

If you do it from the son's POV in third person, then my suggestion is to introduce plenty of elements of uncertainty and inexperience into the son's perspective, because he's young and he's a virgin.

 

[sumptuouscove]

I would

I wrote a long 8-chapter series about a son pursuing his mom, so I understand the appeal of wanting to write the story this way.

Give a lot of thought to whether you want the story in third person POV to reveal just the son's thoughts or the mom's thoughts as well. The advantage of confining POV to one character is you add the element of surprise and mystery: the reader and the narrator do NOT know what one of the primary characters is thinking.

This is how I did it in my mom-son series, and so I was able to add a surprise at the end that a lot of readers seemed to like.

If you do it from the son's POV in third person, then my suggestion is to introduce plenty of elements of uncertainty and inexperience into the son's perspective, because he's young and he's a virg

I wrote a long 8-chapter series about a son pursuing his mom, so I understand the appeal of wanting to write the story this way.

Give a lot of thought to whether you want the story in third person POV to reveal just the son's thoughts or the mom's thoughts as well. The advantage of confining POV to one character is you add the element of surprise and mystery: the reader and the narrator do NOT know what one of the primary characters is thinking.

This is how I did it in my mom-son series, and so I was able to add a surprise at the end that a lot of readers seemed to like.

If you do it from the son's POV in third person, then my suggestion is to introduce plenty of elements of uncertainty and inexperience into the son's perspective, because he's young and he's a virgin.

I want to give 3rd person perspective. Like a bird's eyes view of what's happening. I would also give the thoughts of mother as well that's why I want 3rd person POV. There will be element of surprise because in the story the son is trying to get what he wants but doesn't know if he will ever get it. I also want to tell how the mother thinks and reacts.

 

[sumptuouscove]

I wrote a long 8-chapter series about a son pursuing his mom, so I understand the appeal of wanting to write the story this way.

Give a lot of thought to whether you want the story in third person POV to reveal just the son's thoughts or the mom's thoughts as well. The advantage of confining POV to one character is you add the element of surprise and mystery: the reader and the narrator do NOT know what one of the primary characters is thinking.

This is how I did it in my mom-son series, and so I was able to add a surprise at the end that a lot of readers seemed to like.

If you do it from the son's POV in third person, then my suggestion is to introduce plenty of elements of uncertainty and inexperience into the son's perspective, because he's young and he's a virgin.

I have made the son to be virgin to add up the point that his mother will be his first. Though I am open to it I can change it if I get better perspective.

 

[sumptuouscove]

And TBH I don't know how to write it from son POV. I am not well versed as you guys as a writer.

I wrote a long 8-chapter series about a son pursuing his mom, so I understand the appeal of wanting to write the story this way.

Give a lot of thought to whether you want the story in third person POV to reveal just the son's thoughts or the mom's thoughts as well. The advantage of confining POV to one character is you add the element of surprise and mystery: the reader and the narrator do NOT know what one of the primary characters is thinking.

This is how I did it in my mom-son series, and so I was able to add a surprise at the end that a lot of readers seemed to like.

If you do it from the son's POV in third person, then my suggestion is to introduce plenty of elements of uncertainty and inexperience into the son's perspective, because he's young and he's a virgin.

 

[DarkSollat]

Dudes, the OP is writing porn, stop with all this "it's not romance, it's relucant" thing.

 

[DarkSollat]

Why don't you give some input yourself honey?

Because I have none... honey.

It feels kind of weird the disease being covid. I understand it grounds the story somehow, but it being so serious feels unnatural.

Also, my biggest advise for you would be to finish one story before starting the next one

 

[sumptuouscove]

Because I have none... honey.

It feels kind of weird the disease being covid. I understand it grounds the story somehow, but it being so serious feels unnatural.

Also, my biggest advise for you would be to finish one story before starting the next one

Sir, I get some ideas and I seek advice. If I don't I might forget it altogether or someone else will come up with the very same idea. Talking about COVID why can't it be a serious disease. We've witnessed it's seriousness and lethal effect on mankind.

 

[DarkSollat]

Sir, I get some ideas and I seek advice. If I don't I might forget it altogether or someone else will come up with the very same idea. Talking about COVID why can't it be a serious disease. We've witnessed it's seriousness and lethal effect on mankind.

And so we got from honey to sir...

 

[sumptuouscove]

And so we got from honey to sir

And so we got from honey to sir...

I am here for help, can't have arguments with you. I'll be grateful if you put in some input. Thank you.